well heres something different from what i usaly righ,and skrew my poem thread,i will gladtly spend my credits for people to see these well hope ya like,i want all coments

A tender soul

A beating hurt

all these will leave a mark

whether good

whether bad

all these feelings

will come to right.

abstract and nice i like it thank you for shareing

hello
nice short poem
keep it up ^^

thanks ya all ^^

nice poem luckymouse

your poem is incomplete ~ or maybe that is the way you wanted it

its just sooooo open to interpretations ~ what did ya mean by it ~ BG msg me

well..the poem seems like it's forced together and I'm not sure I get the meaning of this one..

simple jet kewl... short but powerfull... very abstract... i like it though.... keep going

haha incomplete,mebe jes mebe it is or mebe it isnt
lol

aaww me likie this short poem
itz sooo cute lolz

" all these feelings will come to right." Hopeful aren't we. How do you know if it won't just end up all wrong? Who does determine if it is right or wrong? We humans, God, Historians? I'm just playing. It's a good short poem.

haha thanks ya all and jono who knowsmthat could be the meaning of this poem butt the truth is there is no meaning lmao, i just read a freinds poem and thought,hmm ima write one better lol, well im glad ya all liked ^_-

awww its sweet and nice *giggle* keep it up ^_~