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Unfinished Tsubasa Chronicle Wallie

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http://img491.imageshack.us/img491/5443/tsubasachroniclecopy28zh.th.jpg

This was a wallpaper that I discontinued some time ago for being too crappy in my opinion but since now I found the SandBox, I thought I'd post it here. I'm just wondering what people think, if I should finish it, or things I could have done to improve it.

What I was going to do to finish it off was add some sparkly lights, a bit of brushing here and there, change the colours of the background and blend in the scan a bit better.

i think is a great wallie, maybe you should get a best quality scan of sakura & syaoran i love the bg so maybe you should finish it XD

  • bluSake
  • Retired Moderator
  • 2y 43wk ago

Hm...the foreground and the bg don't look quite integrated.

* The extraction looks fine. However, the charas are a bit small, and sort of overwhelmed by the rest of the wall. They're also a bit over-filtered.

* The foreground effects are interesting, but too sharp for the soft feel of the rest of the wall. If you want to keep them, I suggest blurring them out more. Also, the colors of the symbols inside the circle clash with the pastels of the charas and bg.

* The sky is interesting, but the clouds are too regular and the perspective isn't quite right. We're seeing the charas head-on, but the photo of the sky looks like it was taken from below. I think another stock photo would work better. Also, the edges of the beam of light is a little to sharp, not diffused enough.

Hope this helps. :)

Quote by bluSakeHm...the foreground and the bg don't look quite integrated.

* The extraction looks fine. However, the charas are a bit small, and sort of overwhelmed by the rest of the wall. They're also a bit over-filtered.

* The foreground effects are interesting, but too sharp for the soft feel of the rest of the wall. If you want to keep them, I suggest blurring them out more. Also, the colors of the symbols inside the circle clash with the pastels of the charas and bg.

* The sky is interesting, but the clouds are too regular and the perspective isn't quite right. We're seeing the charas head-on, but the photo of the sky looks like it was taken from below. I think another stock photo would work better. Also, the edges of the beam of light is a little to sharp, not diffused enough.

Hope this helps. :)

Thanks for the advice! I'll keep these things in mind the next time I make another wallie. :D

I think maybe the characters shouldn't be cramped in the corner. Its a nice image and I love the blue atmosphere behind it but I don't think it goes together. I like the 3 color theme that some people use. You have black, white, blue, pink, purple and a lil bit of yellow. It seems odd.

What a beautiful wall. I think you should finish completing it. But you need to work on the character scan a little bit more.

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