When I walk down the hallway and see all the couples
When they kiss and hug and hold hands all the time
I can not tell what I am feeling.
I feel anger in my blood at the couples because I feel useless
My heart begins to drop to the bottom of my stomach and it only feels
darkness
When the tears of sorrow try to break out, I try to hold them back and only
tears of hatred will appear.
The hole in my heart, that I can not seem to fill, becomes bigger and
all my hopes and dreams seem to be sucked into it trying to fill the void
Is it love I need in my life or is it just another feeling that will
pass?
The feeling that you have when someone is there to confort you when you are sad,
is that love?
The feeling that you have when someone is there to laugh with you all the time,
is that love?
The feeling that you have when you stand next to the person you care for, is
that love?
The feeling that you have when you want to protect that person no matter what,
is that love?
If love is so wonderful and love is everywhere around you and there is hope of
love for each and every person, why do some people die alone?
From love to hate, from happiness to sorrow, and from pure light to pure
darkness, everyone should be entitled to feel this feeling once in their life
but, I guess, some people are more lucky than others.
Never live in regret, feel the feeling no matter how much it would hurt later
Like everyone says "It is better to have loved and lost, than to not have
loved at all"
Never feel like you are useless, if you believe in it enough, you can find your
true love someday
You have good ideas about what to write about, but you are trying to say too
much in one line. You have to break it up and make your points quick and simple
in each line. The combination of the lines make a real complex statement. And I
beg please, don't end a line with "and". The last word is suppose to
emphasis your point in the line, so "and" just says you have another
point, and you wasted your emphasis on your first point.
I made this poem recently while I was at home:
The Heart That Never Felt
by StevOmaru
When I walk down the hallway and see all the couples
When they kiss and hug and hold hands all the time
I can not tell what I am feeling.
I feel anger in my blood at the couples because I feel useless
My heart begins to drop to the bottom of my stomach and it only feels darkness
When the tears of sorrow try to break out, I try to hold them back and only tears of hatred will appear.
The hole in my heart, that I can not seem to fill, becomes bigger and
all my hopes and dreams seem to be sucked into it trying to fill the void
Is it love I need in my life or is it just another feeling that will pass?
The feeling that you have when someone is there to confort you when you are sad, is that love?
The feeling that you have when someone is there to laugh with you all the time, is that love?
The feeling that you have when you stand next to the person you care for, is that love?
The feeling that you have when you want to protect that person no matter what, is that love?
If love is so wonderful and love is everywhere around you and there is hope of love for each and every person, why do some people die alone?
From love to hate, from happiness to sorrow, and from pure light to pure darkness, everyone should be entitled to feel this feeling once in their life but, I guess, some people are more lucky than others.
Never live in regret, feel the feeling no matter how much it would hurt later
Like everyone says "It is better to have loved and lost, than to not have loved at all"
Never feel like you are useless, if you believe in it enough, you can find your true love someday
Wow, a very powerful, emotional poem.
Very good poem
Very nice poem . . . full of emotion . . . Thank you for sharing it.
it's a meaningful poem but it's more like advice than a poem..a nice display of emotions though
nice poem ^^ very emotive
sounds like a good idea to me. thank you for sharing your talent with us here.
good job
You have good ideas about what to write about, but you are trying to say too much in one line. You have to break it up and make your points quick and simple in each line. The combination of the lines make a real complex statement. And I beg please, don't end a line with "and". The last word is suppose to emphasis your point in the line, so "and" just says you have another point, and you wasted your emphasis on your first point.