This is my first wallpaper. I tried to find images of bleach which wasn't
commonly used as many of the others you currently see (like Bankai Ichigo). It
seems basic, and I based it on the PSP mini game of the same name.
BlocKON!
Ummmm, the scan looks very blurred, I think you should clean up the scan more
Other than that, I think the repetitiveness is such a turn off for me.. I kinda
do not like it It is better to have one to two focal point(s) on the wall
rather than so many scans being repeated again and again...
Oh, the color scheme is also not very good, because the yellow color diagonal
line is too contrasting...
Ummm, and your personal credit is way too big for the wallpaper I think, you
should resize it
Well, mainly, I think it's good that you are trying to do a scan that is not
much used, but you should also try to make your background original and balanced
even
though it is based on the PSP game, I think the wall is way too cluttered with
this design...maybe you should rethink on the background... but first thing
first, clean up the scan!
Thanks for your contructive critism everyone, especially tareren. The scan looks
blurred because I blurred it. I didnt know how to smoothen the image or clean it
up so I blurred it to try and give it a more anti-aliased feel. (I'll learn next
time how to clean the images if I decide to make another wall.)The repeated scan
were used to fill the lack of ability in the background. The colour? Can't say
much about that... But from everything else said, I take it all into account for
future ideas and stuff.
Hmmm, what I mean by cleaning is making it less grainy.. you could do that by
using the smudge tool (hard work) an easy
way would be to duplicate the layer, than you put gaussian blur at around
3.0-5.0 pixel, then you put the duplicated-blurred layer on overlay I think it
would work fine
Hmmm, and I think it would look nicer not blurred (the scans that is )
Hope that helps ;D
This is my first wallpaper. I tried to find images of bleach which wasn't commonly used as many of the others you currently see (like Bankai Ichigo). It seems basic, and I based it on the PSP mini game of the same name. BlocKON!
Heres the link for the file in full, i think.
[img=http://img300.imageshack.us/img300/9146/blockon5bu.jpg]
Ummmm, the scan looks very blurred, I think you should clean up the scan more
It is better to have one to two focal point(s) on the wall
rather than so many scans being repeated again and again... 
even
though it is based on the PSP game, I think the wall is way too cluttered with
this design...maybe you should rethink on the background... but first thing
first, clean up the scan! 
Other than that, I think the repetitiveness is such a turn off for me.. I kinda do not like it
Oh, the color scheme is also not very good, because the yellow color diagonal line is too contrasting...
Ummm, and your personal credit is way too big for the wallpaper I think, you should resize it
Well, mainly, I think it's good that you are trying to do a scan that is not much used, but you should also try to make your background original and balanced
Hi!
for your first wallpaper is not bad... with the time take a more experience...
not bad,.....
too bright/light for my taste but decent
Thanks for your contructive critism everyone, especially tareren. The scan looks blurred because I blurred it. I didnt know how to smoothen the image or clean it up so I blurred it to try and give it a more anti-aliased feel. (I'll learn next time how to clean the images if I decide to make another wall.)The repeated scan were used to fill the lack of ability in the background. The colour? Can't say much about that... But from everything else said, I take it all into account for future ideas and stuff.
Hmmm, what I mean by cleaning is making it less grainy.. you could do that by using the smudge tool (hard work)
an easy
way would be to duplicate the layer, than you put gaussian blur at around
3.0-5.0 pixel, then you put the duplicated-blurred layer on overlay 
I think it
would work fine 
)
Hmmm, and I think it would look nicer not blurred (the scans that is
Hope that helps ;D