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edgar alan... ish... ya... anyway, i enjoyed reading it, without any analysis...

tis a broken craven heart, that seeketh never to depart

kirei desu nee... simply enjoying the beauty of it

Edgar Alan? Wow... I never intended it to be so morbid. Haha. But I guess writing poems late at night will do that to you. Thanks Jasaiyajin. I think you analyzed it quite well... without any analysis.

nice poem love it! keep it up

I don't know if this is similar to an Edger Alan Poe poem, but it is morbid. I'm guessing the "Nevermore" gives the impression of edger alan poe. But it is well written, I do get the feeling of sadness after i was done. Thanks for that

lol sorry j0n0! That's the last morbid one for me. No more depressing people.

Yes it is "Edgar Alan Poe" ish in the begining because of it's old poetic rhyme and it's subject. This poem sounds like a one sided love, especially the following:
No longer do you hear me
Although I'm at your side
How many days and nights now
Since you've said your lie?
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"Since you've said your lie", that makes it sound like she broke up with you but you're still after her.

It is still pretty good

The poem evolves to that point and not only is he still after her, he kills her to make her stay.

Love Forever, love is free...

Nice use of words and emotion in it... and it doesnt fully show an Edgar Allan-ish type of poem cos thats you talking and writing. :P