I just finished writing this poem, it's my first release on MT for a long time,
I hope you enjoy this one. It's called "Fantasy of Love", and I say
it's darker and perhaps a little sad, depending how you read it. Well, see you
later and please, as always, remember to enjoy the poem.
Fantasy of Love
Love,
the eternal bond,
shared between,
two souls,
or so it is said.
This bond,
so mysterious,
yet so familiar.
The bond,
that makes one,
feel at ease,
and yet at unease.
That very bond,
bound two souls together,
for all eternity,
yet,
as I look for answers,
more mystery confronts me,
as I am unaware,
as to who,
I am bound.
Looking for her,
I cannot see,
what is right,
in-front of me,
I only see a figure,
not a person.
I don't see that person,
yet I feel them in my heart,
as I see their hand,
slowly entering my heart,
but,
to only cause me pain,
is this what love is?
Or is it just,
a self-deluded fantasy,
that we,
label,
as love.
Is what I am seeing,
nothing more than,
my own fantasy,
yet,
it felt,
so real,
so convincing.
Even to my closed eyes,
and my deaf ears,
it all,
felt so very real.
And in the darkness,
my eyes closed,
my ears shut,
I sit there,
continuing to fantasize,
waiting to see,
if it really was,
nothing but,
a fantasy.
I don't know if i'm too tired or does this poem puts you in a trance when you
read it. Can't judge too well right now, must come bbbbaaaaaccckk
laaaataaaaaaaaasshhhhhh aaaaaashhhhhhh aaaaaaaaashhhhhhhhh
waahhh ! so wonderful ! its been a long time since u submit ur poems...
i dont know why but i think this poem is kinda sad ^.^' lol
great one ! ..looking forward for more poems from u !
I just finished writing this poem, it's my first release on MT for a long time, I hope you enjoy this one. It's called "Fantasy of Love", and I say it's darker and perhaps a little sad, depending how you read it. Well, see you later and please, as always, remember to enjoy the poem.
Fantasy of Love
Love,
the eternal bond,
shared between,
two souls,
or so it is said.
This bond,
so mysterious,
yet so familiar.
The bond,
that makes one,
feel at ease,
and yet at unease.
That very bond,
bound two souls together,
for all eternity,
yet,
as I look for answers,
more mystery confronts me,
as I am unaware,
as to who,
I am bound.
Looking for her,
I cannot see,
what is right,
in-front of me,
I only see a figure,
not a person.
I don't see that person,
yet I feel them in my heart,
as I see their hand,
slowly entering my heart,
but,
to only cause me pain,
is this what love is?
Or is it just,
a self-deluded fantasy,
that we,
label,
as love.
Is what I am seeing,
nothing more than,
my own fantasy,
yet,
it felt,
so real,
so convincing.
Even to my closed eyes,
and my deaf ears,
it all,
felt so very real.
And in the darkness,
my eyes closed,
my ears shut,
I sit there,
continuing to fantasize,
waiting to see,
if it really was,
nothing but,
a fantasy.
really awesome man! thanks for sharing^^
I usually fall asleep reading to long poems but this is good enough to keep me awake lol
omoshiroiiiii .... but it's just too simple, like an experience/thought not covered by a poet ~ still it is a very good try... ~_^
i enjoyed your explication of the fantasy of love
Excellent work, as always, my friend. I always enjoy being able to read your work.
wow! wonderful ! great work as always my friend
I don't know if i'm too tired or does this poem puts you in a trance when you read it. Can't judge too well right now, must come bbbbaaaaaccckk laaaataaaaaaaaasshhhhhh aaaaaashhhhhhh aaaaaaaaashhhhhhhhh
waahhh ! so wonderful ! its been a long time since u submit ur poems...
i dont know why but i think this poem is kinda sad ^.^' lol
great one ! ..looking forward for more poems from u !