well firstly the vector is really well done- my only crit is on the arm on the
right- on the underside of the arm, the right part is thicker than the left and
doesn't seem to gradually thicken from left to right- not sure if that was
intended, but it looks a bit strange.
I don't mind the font actually- it's pretty well done because it suits the
clothing style of the character. Perhaps the wires might also need some
variation in width here and there perhaps? Or maybe even more wires ~ last thing
is the red grunge background- I'm not too sure on the colour - I know it's sort
of "death" ish, but hmmm. Constrasts a bit too much with the green
maybe. Overall since it's such a malicious kind of wallpaper, I think it should
be much darker instead of using white lol - but you're not finished I don't
think ---
Hopefully there are a few suggestions somewhere in there @_@ <3 the vector
The vector needs texturing if the backround is going to be so texurized as well.
The colors are a little odd, I would have chosen something much darker -- a red
or black mix for the backround and colors of the vector as well. As for the font
... well, I don't really like it in general, or the positioning. Try something
else, like lining it horizontally on the left portion of the wallpaper, or
something.
Other than that, it is an okay wallpaper. Just keep working on it and you will
eventually have whatever's in mind.
The scan is from AP so I just went with the original bg that was in the scan,
however it turned out empty @_@
I added a few more wires, a slight texture and some extra colors.
Thanks for your comments http://img282.imageshack.us/img282/9674/walter8zn.jpg
I still don't like the colors in the backround :| But if you like it then I
guess you should just submit it. Great job on everything, the extra wires and
textures look great. Maybe more textures on the character would help, but still,
awesome work.
Wallpaper
I
always had problems with text so any suggestions will help a lot.
I'm really am not satisfied with it
hmm... i don't know
maybe you could try changing font you used
and well also try adding some more stuff at BG it feel so empty
well firstly the vector is really well done- my only crit is on the arm on the right- on the underside of the arm, the right part is thicker than the left and doesn't seem to gradually thicken from left to right- not sure if that was intended, but it looks a bit strange.
I don't mind the font actually- it's pretty well done because it suits the clothing style of the character. Perhaps the wires might also need some variation in width here and there perhaps? Or maybe even more wires ~ last thing is the red grunge background- I'm not too sure on the colour - I know it's sort of "death" ish, but hmmm. Constrasts a bit too much with the green maybe. Overall since it's such a malicious kind of wallpaper, I think it should be much darker instead of using white lol - but you're not finished I don't think ---
Hopefully there are a few suggestions somewhere in there @_@ <3 the vector
The vector needs texturing if the backround is going to be so texurized as well. The colors are a little odd, I would have chosen something much darker -- a red or black mix for the backround and colors of the vector as well. As for the font ... well, I don't really like it in general, or the positioning. Try something else, like lining it horizontally on the left portion of the wallpaper, or something.
Other than that, it is an okay wallpaper. Just keep working on it and you will eventually have whatever's in mind.
The scan is from AP so I just went with the original bg that was in the scan, however it turned out empty @_@
I added a few more wires, a slight texture and some extra colors.
Thanks for your comments
http://img282.imageshack.us/img282/9674/walter8zn.jpg
I still don't like the colors in the backround :| But if you like it then I guess you should just submit it. Great job on everything, the extra wires and textures look great. Maybe more textures on the character would help, but still, awesome work.