Three poems in 1. Makes sense either way. Seperated for convience
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Love and Compassion
Who needs them?
It only causes pain
Making us go insane
This will forever be
Will we leave it untamed?
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The skies were dark
Hatred everlasting
We have no heart
Love neverlasting
Our minds were stopped
Taken by society
With only one thing to spare
Soul ever drastic
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My shadow slowly fades
Noone cares
My prescence of no meaning
My mind of no intellegence
How could I have though I could help?
I've only caused pain
Three poems in 1. Makes sense either way. Seperated for convience
______________
Love and Compassion
Who needs them?
It only causes pain
Making us go insane
This will forever be
Will we leave it untamed?
___________________
The skies were dark
Hatred everlasting
We have no heart
Love neverlasting
Our minds were stopped
Taken by society
With only one thing to spare
Soul ever drastic
_________________
My shadow slowly fades
Noone cares
My prescence of no meaning
My mind of no intellegence
How could I have though I could help?
I've only caused pain
Rhythm, rhythm, where is the rhythm?! Your first poem is the best of the 3 because it has some rhythm in two line combos. But keep trying.