Goodbye. . .

People I love
People I trust

All gone

I cannot be trusted
Nor be loved

I do things that hurt
a person I loved

Not knowing things
are already falling

Goodbye

Are the last words I want
to say

Before this cold winter
ends

You never understood me

And I tried to understand you
With all the risks I took

I should leave now
Before anyone else gets hurt

Because of me

I wished that you and I
could have resolved things

But I guess this had to happen

Goodbye. . .

to me this is bitter sweet. nicely done my friend.

yeah, its just that bad events happened yesterday.

nice poem, lil on the sad side, but a very good poem

the poem is good like all your other ones even if its on the sad side. i hope everything is going okay with you marauder09. if you need help you can always ask me okay ^^.

so sad! i feel very melancholic after reading this poem... though the rhythm and beat of the poem is not very strong, but the feelings are so strong that i can feel the sadness within it.

don't say goodbye. because it is a sad thing to say to someone you love...

this one was sweet with a cringing bite, nicely done, you're starting to learn how to use your words to manipulate peoples emotions.

its like the cold winter breeze snowflake landing on your iris

That's really good but sad in a way.Good job Marauder-san.

Wow.....great and meaningful poem.Keep it up ....Good job about your poem.