That Star In The Sky...
The thinning of my features,
The wrinkling of my skin,
Mind full of memories of places I've been.

A time long ago when I was young,
Full of journeys and songs I hadn't sung,
My past, what a sweet tale how I wished it to last.

Time still floating by, as I get older.
My body ever getting colder,
Prepares for death, a new adventure.

(For my life has been full,
Of fun and adventure, never dull.
I never fear I have missed a moment.

Look in to the night sky,
Make a wish,
Don't wonder why.
I am that comet,
Passing by,
To check on the ones loved,
From my past life)

I am now that star in the sky...

So yeah, thats my poem, basically it is about a family member or someone you love dying, and there death. I was just a little bored so just thought I would write something quickly Hopes you like it! Feed back would be nice... thankies!

You're always writing about sad themes, ne? But I liked it, very touching and sensitive! You're a great poet! I loved the second stanza!
Congrats!

Wow,you didi a meaningfula nd nice poem !
Of course I like this poem.

that was excellent with lots of feeling i love it! xD

Death, our slow killer using time as a weapon, yet it can only kill that which it creates.

I liked the poem, no critique here... just enjoyed it.

Oh, that's a really nice poem. It's so beautiful.

LOL, it suppost to be a sad poem, but when I read it, the tone seemed more of a happy beat. lol

Wow 0_0 great peom! I love sad themes! ^_^ I don't know why. I think its because they are just more emotional and really get to me *sniff