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anima241

anima241

Holdin onto the past!

o.k folks time to challenge all the writers here in MT.
the way you play is we all make a story together, you start where the person above you left off.
i'll start it (oh yeah the last thing is we all play as the first five charaters that are introduced in the beginning,so lets say if the charaters were bob,joe,lisa,mike,and sally they would be the only charaters that are in the story,and anyone that wanted to play could take over and become the charater, the very last thing is all MUST BE WRITTEN IN A THIRD PERSON STORY PERSPECTIVE! here goes there has to be lots of detail)

A ship creaks in the distance. Waves crash up against it's side. Dimitri Galleon sleeps on the floor snoring. His brown hair covers his deep green eyes. he dreams of a girl to be with...

(there it goes continue the story!)

fading away isn't an option.

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happygreendragonfly

happygreendragonfly

The Cheerful Person

And in his dreams he saw a raven haired lass with soft-spoken eyes which shone with determination of what he does not know. But he knew he has fallen in love with her. The dream is starting to haze, and then he was jerk awake! Dimitri opened his eyes and saw his comrad, William Cunningham, laughing at him. Dimitri gave William a displeased look and scanned his surroundings for the dream that have been lost.

(MAN! I hate writing, especially detailed writing! But HAPPY to be your first postee! ^__^)

StevOmaru

StevOmaru

The Killing Perfection

With the dream no where in sight, Dimitri tries to slumber once again but is unable to because of the rude awaking Dimitri had received from William. Finding that it is still early afternoon, Dimitri and William retrieve food for there own meal when both Dimitri and William bump into their friend Linus Callearch who is carrying his own food. Linus looked into Williams and Dimitris eyes with much displeasure as the food is now wasted. Even in all of this Dimitri still recalls to himself the dream is so wished he had again while Linus and William babble to each other, just thinking about that dream makes him light headed with desire for such a prize.

(This is preety fun)

"I'll kill him eventually...but at the moment...for someone who doesn't realize anything at all, killing him has no value." Sesshoumaru Sama

anima241

anima241

Holdin onto the past!

(dimitri,william,and linus. We need two more charaters please let them be girls, lol)

fading away isn't an option.

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happygreendragonfly

happygreendragonfly

The Cheerful Person

Aww... fine... I'll type some more...

Meanwhile, at the town square there was two sisters selling beautiful smelling bouquets and wreaths. The beauty of these sisters are complete opposites of each other. The eldest is a raven-haired beauty with soft green eyes named COCONUT (LOL! Just kidding) Hope Charlomagne. The youngest sister is a golden-haired lass with flashing green eyes named Faith. The two sisters have been living in this town all their lives. The towns people absolutely adore these two sisters...

(Hope and Faith, original, ne?)

anima241

anima241

Holdin onto the past!

(nice o.k lets keep it going, i wont be typing the story, i only started it, i just wanna see where this story goes. i'll bring in the evil people in once the story gets longer,keeppp going folks, We need more people!)

fading away isn't an option.

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afaT

afaT

Let Air take me home...

(Lets see what I can do ^^)

The two sisters were so beautiful so they could change the mood directly on the persons around them. Everyone were so happy that they existed in the village. But the only way the two sisters could get money were to sell bouquets and wreaths. For some reason, the two sisters didnt want to get a job. Everybody that offered the two sisters any job sighed when they heard the same answer all the time. But it wasnt so much to do about it.

The two sisters lived a calm life... but one day, it happened.

(Hehe ^^. This was fun. But im not so good at english T_T)

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StevOmaru

StevOmaru

The Killing Perfection

Two theifs ran by and grabbed a couple of the products the sisters sold and as they called for help, nobody responded. Being near the town square, Dimitri runs after the theifs with Linus and William right behind him after they heard the cries for help, the theifs try to escape but Dimitri is too fast for them. Dimitri leaps at one of them and tackles him to the end. The other theif escapses while the first one is at the mercy of Dimitri.

"I'll kill him eventually...but at the moment...for someone who doesn't realize anything at all, killing him has no value." Sesshoumaru Sama

afaT

afaT

Let Air take me home...

(I can type some more ^^)

The two sisters were so confused about everything, but they followed on their instincts and ran after the three mysterious guys. Hope and Faith didnt know what to do. Now they have to go and harvest more special bouquets and wreaths. The reason they could survive with just those items was beacuse it were special items. The only way to find those special bouquets and wreaths were to climb up a mountain and carve in special spell beneath a big rock that have been thrown by a giant. The rock will then start to glow and produce the bouquets and wreaths, but really slow. The two sisters were terrified about everything, but they still ran and ran and ran after the persons.

William, Linus and Dimitri took care of the thief. But they didnt know if he had the items or not. But he hadnt. When the two sisters came to the three guys, they saw disapointment in their eyes. Dimitri showed the one and only item the thief had, a bouquet. Now the sisters didnt know what to do. Its a long journey to the mountain, and now they dont have any items to sell. The money they had were not enough to buy food for the journey. The two sisters didnt know what to do, and William saw that they had big problems. With Linus and Dimitri investigating the other items the thief had William turned around and looked at them with a smile on his face. Linus and Dimitri smiled too. Its time for them to help the two sisters and go out on a journey. Its time for them to see the dangerous mountain, "Sercandras Cursed Mountain".

(Quite much this time ^^. I hope some more persons will come and continue on this story. Its quite hard to keep up an story all the time ^^.)

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rituel

rituel

kLepToMAniaX Designs

(i'll add dialogue then)
"The items," Dimitri said, grabbing the thief by the scruff of his neck, "Where did you friend take them?"
Though he spoke calmly, it was clearly an order. But the thief didn't seem to be willing to cooperate.
"Where are the items? Why did you take them?"

Still no answer.

"Who do you work for?" Dimitri asked again.
Still, the thief didn't say a thing.
"Answer me!"

"I suggest you do as the man says," William said, lighting a cigarette, "or we'll go to... shall we say, ah, extreme measures to coax the information out of you.

"Do what you wish, but rest assured, not a word will come out of my mouth," the thief finally spoke.

"Why you--" Dimitri lifted his fist, but a large hand stopped him.
"It's useless," Linus said, his towering figure overshadowing Dimitri and the thief on the ground, "We'll get nothing from him," he continued, letting go of Dimitri's hand.

afaT

afaT

Let Air take me home...

(Its so fun to type on this story, so I just have to type some more ^^)

But Dimitri still tried to do as he planned. Linus realize that going to extreme measures wouldnt solve anything. What William is planning to do is wrong. With this thought in his mind, he tried something else. But he had to stop Dimitri from punching the thief, while William walked to the two sisters, Hope and Faith. The two sisters were just going to walk away from the mess, but William stopped them. The two sisters didnt want to have any help from him. He was too rough. But William wanted to help them, and he did. Screaming really loud, he told Dimitri to stop his silliness. Dimitri stopped immediately. At the moment it was useless to proceed. Going against William is not the best decision. The thief looked terrified and started to slowly stand up on his legs. Linus watched when the thief ran away as fast as he could. Really irritating, the thief escaped without any resistans from Dimitri. He just stood there and waited for Williams commands, obeying like a puppet. Linus and Dimitri walked to William and started to listen on the conversation he and the two sisters had. Williams plan was far from honorable.

On the field of "Sercandras Cursed Battlefield", our heroes walk like zombies. They are really bored. Linus is complaining about Williams bad plan while Dimitri is trying to defend him with words like "he is a good captain" and "his plan is going to be a nice story in the future". The two sisters have walked quietly all the way from the village. Williams smile on his face would never stop. His plan is good for the entire group. One: They are helping the two sisters. Two: They get some of the money. Three: Maybe Hope or Faith will start to like someone in the group. William knows this is going to be a piece of cake. The mountain cant be so terrible as they say. Williams smile starts to get wider and wider. He thinks his plan is perfect.

(Williams plan: He and Linus and Dimitri helps the two sisters to get their bouquets and wreaths. They will get some of the money, and plus they will see the "terrible" mountain. He likes Hope, and he is hoping to start a conversation with her so they can get some feelings for each other. Maybe someone else in the group gets a girlfriend.)

Sercandras Cursed Mountain is a dark place. The only light that exists there comes from the rock and from Faiths right hand. For the first time Dimitri starts to dislike Williams plan. William starts to dislike his plan too. Linus agrees completely to their both thoughts about this plan. The two sisters told the three guys earlier that the darkness that covers them is evil. Being a big group isnt safe at all. William knows that darkness cant catch him. But he had wrong. He felt something cold wrap around him...

(O.O Am I ruining the story now or am I writing too much that makes me ruin the story? I think I will be back again in this thread ^^. Just tell me if I should stop. Ok?)

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Raidemon666

lord of the lazy

When William turned around, he saw a dead body with a freakish smile placed on him. The group started to tremor in fear as they moved along the mountain path. But the image of the two sisters helped the group of three continue forward as they persevere to execute William's plan, but suddenly the worst that they expected appeared right in front of their eyes...

(I hope that my piece makes sense

happygreendragonfly

happygreendragonfly

The Cheerful Person

***COMMENTARY***COMMENTARY***

AfaT is on a writing FRENZY! LOL!

Anyways, are you trying to make this into a LOVE TRIANGLE between Dimitri, Hope and William?! (I dislike love triangles.... I do!) Hmm... maybe further into the story we can introduce another raven-haired gal. Waddya think? ^__^

Or I can change the names around... Hope to Faith and Faith to Hope? I really dislike love triangles... can you tell?! ^__^

Then Linus will be all alone... another raven-haired gal character should be good!

Linus and Faith; William and Hope; Dimitri and raven-haired gal... Waddya think?! THREE HAPPY DYSFUNCTIONAL PAIRS! (I'll make it dysfunctional... HAHAHAHA... just kidding.)

^__^ Anyways, I like your WRITING FRENZY! I'll write some, too! But later on... I've been hit with the lazy bug... ^__^

***COMMENTARY***COMMENTARY***

StevOmaru

StevOmaru

The Killing Perfection

As the eyes of most of the party stare at the freakish dead body, Linus trips over something covered with dirt and dusts it of to only see that it is a human skull. After a further look Linus stumbles on to a bone field, layers upon layers of human bones, like a mad man's graveyard. Linus calls out to the rest of the party to take a look, as the other members arrive they look upon the graveyard in horror. After Dimitri takes a closer look he realizes that there arn't just human bones here, there are demon bones as well. William tells the girls to stay behind him while Linus and Dimitri take a closer look at the bones to try to tell what kind of demons they were. Out of no where, a mystic mist appears from nowhere, a mist so thick that u could not c a person 5 feet in front u. William calles out for Linus and Dimitri to come back, but he doesn't get a response of any kind, just the sound of the mist covering the mountain. When william looks behind himself to c if the girls r safe, they turn out missing. Did the girls just wonder off or did something take them? With that strange sounds begin to come from what seems out of nowhere within the mist. William prepares for the worst, is there demon among him in the mist?

Hehe, I wrote more than I thought I was going to write

"I'll kill him eventually...but at the moment...for someone who doesn't realize anything at all, killing him has no value." Sesshoumaru Sama

rituel

rituel

kLepToMAniaX Designs

(once again, i'm gonna add dialogue. that's ok, right, anima-san?)

Suddenly from behind the thick mist, ominous sounds were heard from every direction, instantly scaring the group. For how long the racket lasted they did not know, but it felt like eternity. And after a long moment's of noise... Silence.

"Stay close, boys," William said, drawing his long sword.
Linus and Dimitri followed suit, and drew their weapons as well. The three of them closed in on the sisters, ready for anything that was to come.
"Steady boys, steady," William said, straining his senses for signs of anything.

"It, whatever it is, is coming," Dimitri said...
Just as Dimitri finished his sentence, there was a loud roar from the mist. A roar unlike any other creature any of them had heard before.

Suddenly a giant beast leapt from behind the mist towards Linus. Swiftfully he dodged the attack and managed to hit the beast with his staff before it disappeared again into the mist.
"They're here!" Linus shouted.

Either it was his fatigue and panic, or was it for real Dimitri did not know, but the mist seemed to be thickening.
"Guys? Are you still there?" Dimitri asked with a quivering voice.
"Don't move! Hold your position at all cost!" Dimitri heard William say.

Whatever attacked Linus earlier seemed to be biding its time, waiting for the right moment to strike.
"What is it with this mist? Why won't it fade?" Linus said, swinging his staff in effort to clear visibility. As if he had been heard, the mist suddenly cleared.

"Finally. That's bet..." before Linus could finish his sentence, he looked around and saw that they were surrounded by several of the beasts that had attacked him earlier.

Giant, four legged dog-like creatures with large upper bodies and long mane. Their thick black coats gleaming slightly in the dim light. Their bright yellow eyes as if boring into their souls.

Suddenly, just as William was about to strike, someone laughed. It was no comical laugh, but a very cold laugh. Sending shivers to the group of five.

"Over there!" Dimitri pointed to a rock, towering high above them. On top of it, was a figure, unmistakably male. A tall, thin man wearing a black robe. His face was covered with a hood.


(go ahead anima-san introduce one of the bad guys...)

happygreendragonfly

happygreendragonfly

The Cheerful Person

***COMMENTARY***COMMENTARY***

THAT'S RIGHT! WE NEED AN ANTAGONIST! Who's going to be the bad guy?!

Until next time!

***COMMENTARY***COMMENTARY***

rituel

rituel

kLepToMAniaX Designs

(fine. I'll continue then.. but just a bit..)

"Who are you? What do you want from us?" Dimitri shouted. (they were quite far apart)
Immediately the man stopped laughing.
After a moment's silence, Dimitri said, "Answer me!"

The man then lifted his hood to reveal his face. Most visible from where they were was his long red hair, tied in a ponytail, which billowed in the wind. His grey eyes had a very hard expression, yet very cold at the same time.
He was actually somewhat handsome, if not for the pure evil emanating from him.

"I'll ask you again, who are you?" Dimitri demanded.
From below Dimitri could faintly see the man smile. The man then stretched his hand forward, signalling the beasts to attack.

"What the--?" Dimitri said, obviously unprepared for the sudden attack.

At first it seemed the three men were at a disadvantage, but then they managed to reverse the situation in their favor. They managed to kill several of the beasts, which disappeared in a whisp of black smoke the moment they were killed.

The red haired man lifted his arm once, as if signalling a halt, and all the remaining beasts disappeared.

--edit--
(done. btw, for the next person who posts, the new character i created is named "Wynterr Deepfreeze" of the Deepfreeze clan, a clan of Magi thought long extinct, okay? thx!)

afaT

afaT

Let Air take me home...

(Im back for more ^^. Wynterr Deepfreeze... hm... interesting. I like it ^^. I hope he got dark powers, cause im going to add quite much of it ^^. And for those who doesnt like love triangels, I can say that nothing is going to happen between them ^^)

Wynterr Deepfreeze is mighty. The group trembled when they
look into his eyes. The only thing they could hope for now is a miracle. But right now everything seemed so meaningless. Fighting against these powers wasnt just worth it. But still their hope never fainted. William and all the others have never been in this kind of situation. For the two sisters it seemed more likely tthat they have come in this kind of situation, and for the sea boys there is no chance that they could have challenged these kind of monsters. But they are really good at handling hard situations. Linus starts to slowly move closer and closer to a wall. He got a great plan, but its going to be dangerous. William and all the others doesnt know what he is up to, but Linus knows that they are far away from him. Its just a feeling he got. While Linus is executing his plan, the two sisters stand close to each other. Their terrified but still so innocent eyes are looking at Wynterr Deepfreeze. They dont know what to do, and they have never used their powers except when they are going to get the bouquets and wreaths. Hope knows that Faith got terrible powers, but she is too afraid to use them. Hope starts to whisper in Faiths ear that she must use her powers. Faith starts to shiver. Thinking about what could happen to the others made her almost cry. But Hope gave her hope back. Faith starts to look down and whisper some magic words. Hope cant stand that language. That language is born from hell. Using those word close to a being that is using holy magic is dangerous. But Hope is used to it. Now, the only thing remaining, is an evil circle...

(EXPLANATION: This time it was not so much as I planned. I accidently deleted the text three times in a row, and now I dont got the patient to do everything again. Thats why im leaving this big space so YOU can decide what she is going to summon. But I can say that Wynterr Deepfreeze is intressted in those powers. I really hope that my english is not that bad ^^'. Btw, what kind of weapon is Dimitri using? I got stuck there when I wrote everyting for the second time XD)

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rituel

rituel

kLepToMAniaX Designs

***comment***
bout Dimitri's weapon, afaT-san, i was about to give him a spear or something, but decided to leave it to the creativity of the next person.

Hey am I the only dialogue guy here?

***comment***

--edit--
I'm now typing the next part, pls don't post yet...

merged: 12-30-2005 ~ 12:15pm
(more dialogue! yay!^^)

Just as Hope starts to finish the enchantment, Wynterr sensed the dark magic emitting from her.
Unbelievable... A girl like her... how could she have such great magic power? Wynterr thought. Coming to his senses, he cast a Dark Ball at Faith.

The Dark Ball directly hit the group, sending them flying in all directions.

"What the--? The Dark Ball? Impossible!" Faith said in disbelief.
How did he? The Dark Ball... It's very advanced Dark Magic... One that powerful... in such a short time, too... This man... who is he...? Hope thought. She had knowledge of the Dark arts as well as Light, but had no magic ability.

Suddenly, Deepfreeze disappeared in a whisp of black smoke, and reappeared at the foot of the cliff.

Impossible! Even the Dark Portal... he can use it that fast... No one could do it that fast Hope thought. But then realization struck her. Unless... No!

"So you finally realize who you're dealing with," Deepfreeze said, walking calmly forward towards the group. His Dark powers allowed him to tap into others people's thoughts.
"What are you talking about?" Dimitri said, stepping forward, ready to fight a battle long lost.
But Wynterr just smiled, and Dark Ported behind Dimitri. "I have no interest in you... All I want is the girl,"

William stepped forward to stop Deepfreeze, but with a lazy wave of his hand, the Dark Beasts were re-Summoned, one to face each person.
"Anyone who tries to stop me will have to face them first," he said coldly.

Linus, being the fastest of the group easily defeated the Dark Beast, and lounged forward at Wynterr. He swung his staff at the Magician, but it just went through him, as if his body were made of smoke.

"What the--?" Linus said, confused.
The Shadow move... Hope thought, trembling with fear. Executed with ease, too...
Wynterr calmly lifted his right arm, and put his hand in front of Linus's face. "Fool," he said. The next thing everyone else knew, Linus was flying several feet into the air, as if blasted by some unseen force.

The energy Wave... I've never felt one so powerful... Hope thought, positively shaking.
Everyone else was unable to move. They were all too scared of Wynterr's powers. They knew they were all no match for him, even if attacked together.

Wynterr then looked at the unconscious Faith. Lifting his finger as if summoning her, he cast a black sphere around her. "Anyone want to stop me?" Wynterr asked coldly. "I didn't think so," he smirked, "Come, girl. My master will make good use of you,"

And with that, Wynterr extracted his black feathered wings and flew away.

"Who... was he?" Dimitri said, legs finally giving in.
"How could someone posses so much Dark powers?" William said, leaning on his sword for support.
"Ask her," Linus said, staggering, "she looks like she knows something,"
"Linus!" Dimitri and William said almost at the same time.
Dimitri and William immediately rushed to help Linus.
"Is it true?" William said to Hope, after making sure Linus wasn't badly hurt.
Unable to speak out of fear, Hope only nodded.
"Who was that man? How come he could be so powerful?" Dimitri demanded.
Swallowing, Hope finally managed to speak, "He... that m- monster... He was..."
"He was what? Speak properly, woman!" Dimitri said, obviously out of pure panic.
"He... h-he was... a D-Deepfreeze," Hope finally managed to say.
"WHAT? Impossible!" William said. Being the leader of the trio, he knew quite a lot. "The Deepfreezes died out ages ago! During the Frozen war!"
"Deepfreeze... Deepfreeze..." Linus said, thinking hard, "I thought they specialized in ice magic?"
"They used to," Dimitri said, "But then some of them, the Outcasts, learnt Dark magic. There was a disagreement between them and the tribe, then..."
"The Frozen War broke out." William said, finishing Dimitri's sentence.

Silence then broke out between them. If one were to listen carefully, one could swear to be able to hear their fearful hearts beating loudly.

Finally, Linus broke the silence. "Whoever that man was, he was no joke, believe me. That blast he gave me... It was unbelievable..."
"I think we all saw how you got blasted, thank you," Dimitri said, more to calm himself down than anything else.
"No. Listen. I know that blast was powerful, but I had a taste of his power. And I can tell you that wasn't even half of it..."

Once again, silence swept among them.
"Guys..." Dimitri said, minutes later, "What the hell have we gotten ourselves into?"


(done! I'll continue after a few comments and/or questions... and later on, pls give names to all of Wynterr's magic moves, except the Dark Ball, I like that)


--edit--
Oh, and name the Dark Beasts too, pls... btw, they disappeared after Wynterr flew off.

happygreendragonfly

happygreendragonfly

The Cheerful Person

***COMMENTARY***COMMENTARY***

That's one hell of a diaglogue! ^__^

***COMMENTARY***COMMENTARY***

How should I continue it? I'll come back tomorrow! That's it! I'll get new ideas tomorrow! Until then! ^__^

rituel

rituel

kLepToMAniaX Designs

***comment***
I seem to be writing more than i intend to... I was kinda planning to write the next part about Wynterr's whereabouts and his master... but then again, we'll need anima-san's evil character for that.... I intended Wynterr to be one of the... um... henchmen (yeah, henchmen. that's the word i'm looking for!) of anima-san's main baddie..
I guess that means i'll be staying clear of this thread for a bit, until the right time, or someone posts a good idea. So keep 'em coming everyone! ^^

***comment***

happygreendragonfly

happygreendragonfly

The Cheerful Person

I came back as promised! Don't type anything before me because I'm typing! ^__^

rituel

rituel

kLepToMAniaX Designs

u gonna add dialogue? i'm bored of being the dialogue guy.

happygreendragonfly

happygreendragonfly

The Cheerful Person

Indeed, what have our heros gotten themselves into? Dimitri, William, Linus, and Hope are still feeling a bit unsettled due to the earlier encounter with the Deepfreeze. Add to all the unsettling feelings, Faith has been captured. Hope is desperately worried about her sister, she doesn't know what to do.

Linus was the frist to speak up again. "It's getting dark. I think we should find shelter and discuss this event later."

"Alright, lets go find a shelter then," said Dimitri and William in unison.

Hope was unable to voice any opinion or outbursts, she reluctantly accepted the men's search for a shelter first before the day gets any darker. Eventhough, she desperately wanted to find her beloved sister's whereabouts.

merged: 12-31-2005 ~ 03:27pm
I know. I know it's SHORT! This is what you call a writer's block! LOL! Hey, Rits, I added like two lines of dialogue... How'd you like that?! LOL! I'm so sleepy... ^__^

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