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Miko sketch... critiques please!

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There was a Miko picture I saw before which I liked very much, so I drew a picture based on it for practice. I thought I'd post it here to see if anyone had any thoughts/critiques on the form.
Note: I'm still working on a lot of parts, so DO NOT view this as if it was the final product :P... Just wanted some thoughts before I went and redrew stuff.

http://img517.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan1a1ac.jpg

A bit dirty LOL, use a black felt pen to make it more pro-like, anyway lets see...legs and the other arm is missing or it doesnt look it its exist underneath the clothes, her right backside shoulder blade structure is missing and...hmm...I like the right sleeve but need some more improvment make it actually looks like its being thrown upward and less look like its being blown strongly by wind

Well, obviously it's not finished and still needs inking and perhaps coloring, but you have a good start. The eyes are pretty nice... however, the hair could use some work... it doesn't quite... I don't know. It could use a little work. So could the hand (but hands are hard ><*) but it's a very good drawing so far, and will certainly be beautiful when it's finished. I'm sorry, I'm rambling... good drawing...:)

I'm a bit confused on how the right arm is connected. From the angle it doesn't seem that her right shoulder is in a realistic place. Nice start, very sketchy...WOuld love to see your final drawing

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