well guys.... here is one of my first poems all y freidns here say that I should
put one so I'll say were I got the inspiration, on msn I saw a contacts picture
that said sorry is not enough.. so I created a poem based on that ^^ hope you
like it and comment about it and give me some suggestions...
SORRY IS NOT ENOUGH
Im sorry I never helped you before
Im sorry I forgot to call
Im sorry I never told you how much I care
And that I never make you a space
Im sorry this didnt last
But I dont regret what we pass
Im sorry of what I have done
But Im really sorry
That sorry is not enough
I'm sorry I don't understand . It's
very deep and seems very meaningful. Being a straight forward person, I'm almost
clueless . It sounds very nice though.
I think I kinda get it. Is it about a girl or boy was suppose to love each
other. But one person did something wrong and made the other person angry. The
angry person was thinking if its the right thing at the first place that he/she
have love each other. The person who got angry by the other person was hating
him... but in the end he/she never hated the other person cuz he/she still loves
that person...
?
?
ok, now I m making myself confused too.... I hope thats wut it meant.
Very interesting! The rhytmn is nice and allows the intelligent conclusion!
Being sorry for sorry not being enough is such a good statement and has a nice
trick of words!
I'll surely use this on my writing someday! It's a very good and powerful
statement!
The message in a whole has power too and sadness.
I liked how you got inspired! You might be a sensitive person!
Congrats!
Wow! A really beautiful poem! It's so lovely, and it has a interesting trick of
words, as CosmoStar says ^^! Keep writing, I will be looking foward to read more
of your work!
Sayonara!
well guys.... here is one of my first poems all y freidns here say that I should put one so I'll say were I got the inspiration, on msn I saw a contacts picture that said sorry is not enough.. so I created a poem based on that ^^ hope you like it and comment about it and give me some suggestions...
SORRY IS NOT ENOUGH
Im sorry I never helped you before
Im sorry I forgot to call
Im sorry I never told you how much I care
And that I never make you a space
Im sorry this didnt last
But I dont regret what we pass
Im sorry of what I have done
But Im really sorry
That sorry is not enough
I'm sorry I don't understand
. It's
very deep and seems very meaningful. Being a straight forward person, I'm almost
clueless 
. It sounds very nice though.
very nice , and for someone who understands the meaning behind the poem ,it will become more beautiful...
I think I kinda get it. Is it about a girl or boy was suppose to love each other. But one person did something wrong and made the other person angry. The angry person was thinking if its the right thing at the first place that he/she have love each other. The person who got angry by the other person was hating him... but in the end he/she never hated the other person cuz he/she still loves that person...
?
?
ok, now I m making myself confused too.... I hope thats wut it meant.
Good poem, I like it cuz its so .... lovely
Very interesting! The rhytmn is nice and allows the intelligent conclusion! Being sorry for sorry not being enough is such a good statement and has a nice trick of words!
I'll surely use this on my writing someday! It's a very good and powerful statement!
The message in a whole has power too and sadness.
I liked how you got inspired! You might be a sensitive person!
Congrats!
IM SORRY I READ THAT POEM, HEHE...
XD Why did you write it so cheezy?
Wow! A really beautiful poem! It's so lovely, and it has a interesting trick of words, as CosmoStar says ^^! Keep writing, I will be looking foward to read more of your work!
Sayonara!
Wow, this poem is really good. not bad for a thirteen year old. keep it up^_^