Hey I am just posting a link for a wallpaper i'm working on. It is a smaller
version but please look, and give some positve/ constructive criticism. I'm new
to the software so any help would be, thanks.
Please make it into a bigger version! Then it would be totally awesome! I love
Elfen Lied and I have never seen a wallpaper like that one. I really like it!
* First, have to agree with Spystreak about the nudity.
* Use of straight screenshots is usually not taken well. It looks low effort
and, when blocked like this, too busy. Your bg looks like its going towards
abstract. Perhaps you should download some more brushes, experiment with a few
tutorials, and try going the abstract way.
* Having the text spread out scatters attention. Its better to group text closer
together to focus attention. Often you'll see good walls where there's a lot of
text and it's a major part of the composition; that's because it's cohesive
somehow.
Well I played a bit with it today and have a link below of the image in intended
large format. I censored the nudity a bit but I just wanted to convey how she is
so powerful yet can feel so weak and emotional at times. Also the text is spread
out so your eyes move along instead of glued to one area, but I understand and
appreciate your suggestions. again I am new at this so I am just trying stuff
out.
The background looks a bit grainy now. I'm not really artistic so I can't help
you with how to fix it. Also your censoring is too light darken the splotch over
the nudity so that it is not visible at all
Hey I am just posting a link for a wallpaper i'm working on. It is a smaller version but please look, and give some positve/ constructive criticism. I'm new to the software so any help would be, thanks.
Linked here:
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e360/Eliza-chan/898dfffe.jpg
Please make it into a bigger version! Then it would be totally awesome! I love Elfen Lied and I have never seen a wallpaper like that one. I really like it!
Covering up the nudity for one thing well that is if you intend to submit it here at MT. I can't say much else due to the size of the image you posted
Sorry for the smallness photobucket auto resized so i messing with it...
* First, have to agree with Spystreak about the nudity.
* Use of straight screenshots is usually not taken well. It looks low effort and, when blocked like this, too busy. Your bg looks like its going towards abstract. Perhaps you should download some more brushes, experiment with a few tutorials, and try going the abstract way.
* Having the text spread out scatters attention. Its better to group text closer together to focus attention. Often you'll see good walls where there's a lot of text and it's a major part of the composition; that's because it's cohesive somehow.
Hope this helps.
Well I played a bit with it today and have a link below of the image in intended large format. I censored the nudity a bit but I just wanted to convey how she is so powerful yet can feel so weak and emotional at times. Also the text is spread out so your eyes move along instead of glued to one area, but I understand and appreciate your suggestions. again I am new at this so I am just trying stuff out.
Large image linked belows:
http://i43.photobucket.com/albums/e360/Eliza-chan/ElfenLied_1024copy.jpg
The background looks a bit grainy now. I'm not really artistic so I can't help you with how to fix it. Also your censoring is too light darken the splotch over the nudity so that it is not visible at all