I made this one a few time ago and posted it in here, but it was rejected XO, I
made some changes on it, especially in the focus on naruto, but i would like
some advice on how to improve it. Tell me what you think, thanks in
advise.:D
Okay, firstly I think the image is kinda blurry. I dunno whether or not it's the
effect you want, but fact is, it's kinda blurry.
- I personally think the work is too dark, try using brighter colors, or if you
want to go for the dark effect, use a different background.
- I think the wall is kind of simple by MT standards. Try adding more effects.
It looks as if you got a pic of Naruto, the symbols, and then slapped them onto
the frame.
- Unless you're "Eiennokaze" i suggest you refrain from posting it,
coz MT is against ripping from other sites.
Lastly, I meant absolutely no offense in my comments.
yes it is blury. also i think you should put a clearer, more darker picture of
naruto rather then the transperent one you have now. this has real great
potental.
* First, I'd like to reiterate what rituel said, especially the last point.
Hm...I guess you're trying to credit the brushmaker, but putting the name on a
seperate line confuses the issue. Also, add a "wall by" next to your
own name.
* Definitely get a clearer pic of chara, one that doesn't bleed into the bg as
much. A better quality pic wouldn't be a bad idea either.
* The composition needs a lot of work. The symbol to the right doesn't add to
the composition, but instead competes with the chara to be the focus of the
wall. Bg elements shouldn't do that.
It looks like you're going the abstract route, so I suggest going around and
looking at other walls to see where you want to go. Then go and experiment with
some tutorials and download some brushes. With practice you'll improve.
ok,
thanks, i'll take the advices and take off the "eiennokaze" (it was
just to give him credit for the brushes), and change the color combination, and
addd some other stuff. I'll try to put the new one by the weekend.
I made this one a few time ago and posted it in here, but it was rejected XO, I made some changes on it, especially in the focus on naruto, but i would like some advice on how to improve it. Tell me what you think, thanks in advise.:D
Naruto Fuuin
Okay, firstly I think the image is kinda blurry. I dunno whether or not it's the effect you want, but fact is, it's kinda blurry.
- I personally think the work is too dark, try using brighter colors, or if you want to go for the dark effect, use a different background.
- I think the wall is kind of simple by MT standards. Try adding more effects. It looks as if you got a pic of Naruto, the symbols, and then slapped them onto the frame.
- Unless you're "Eiennokaze" i suggest you refrain from posting it, coz MT is against ripping from other sites.
Lastly, I meant absolutely no offense in my comments.
yes it is blury. also i think you should put a clearer, more darker picture of naruto rather then the transperent one you have now. this has real great potental.
* First, I'd like to reiterate what rituel said, especially the last point. Hm...I guess you're trying to credit the brushmaker, but putting the name on a seperate line confuses the issue. Also, add a "wall by" next to your own name.
* Definitely get a clearer pic of chara, one that doesn't bleed into the bg as much. A better quality pic wouldn't be a bad idea either.
* The composition needs a lot of work. The symbol to the right doesn't add to the composition, but instead competes with the chara to be the focus of the wall. Bg elements shouldn't do that.
It looks like you're going the abstract route, so I suggest going around and looking at other walls to see where you want to go. Then go and experiment with some tutorials and download some brushes. With practice you'll improve.
Hope this helps.