Mmm, the extracting and such has improved a little in the second version but it
still could be better.
I don't like either the composition of the wall, I find it's too full and it can
tire you if you see it a lot (when you use it in your own desktop), maybe you
could try reducing the pic and leaving some free space.
I agree with Kazahaya that the wallpaper looks a bit too "busy", it
makes it unclear and unfocussed. I do like some of the half-opacity images
showing action, like the bit in the top left corner. Anyway good effort and
don't take it the wrong way, I made one very similar to this on another anime
too when I was first learning how to use Photoshop
* Like PAPTIMUS said, using screenshots is not allowed here at MT. Since you
almost always have to blow them up to fit the screen, they're almost always very
very low quality. Notice in this one the extreme blurring and artifacting. If
you want to use an image from a screenshot, you'll have to vector trace it.
Otherwise, I suggest you find a good, clean scan to use instead.
* Have to agree with Shujaa about the busy/unfocused composition. Images on low
opacity in the bg are also usually not allowed at MT. They're considered a low
effort way to fill in space. I suggest you try another effect instead. It sort
looks like you're going the abstract way. So, look at some walls whose style you
like, choose where you want to go, experiment with some tutorials, download some
brushes, and practice.
Er... I don't see how getting CS2 should make any difference in the wall unless
you were using anything below PS 3 (where there was no such thing as layers).
Most of the new features just makes it less complicated to do certian stuff. But
all in all, it is still do-able.
The best extraction tool would have to be the pen tool. Good vectoring skills
will ensure that you have an image without jagged edges. Practice vectorising
and you would not have problems with extraction. It is tedious at the start but
the effort pays off.
As said earlier, the wall is to busy. You will have to direct the viewer's
attention to a focal. If you want to ues lots of screen shots, then maybe use a
flimstrip effect (of course your screenshots have to be good quality).
You laugh , i cry when i see your wallies . Not because i like ShinnxStellar but
Shinn's face make me really feel sad . I hate Stellar ... Ok, however , that's
the way you make them . The second looks more clearly . But cuz there're only
screenshots so maybe not really nice . Too much scenes make it hard to see . Ah
not the problem they're all Shinn's emotion so it really impressed .
I believe that the couple of Stellar and Shin are very very very sweet. I love
it. He really wants to make she feel dear. And she wants to be loved. Your wall
is beautiful
the title is "The Tears and Rage of Shinn Asuka"
this is the original which was put up for deletion
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c233/Smartypants911/TearsandRageofShinn.jpg
this is my updated wallie which i made some fixes to it bcuz i recently got CS2 and soo i did some better extraction and such and soo here it is
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c233/Smartypants911/TearsandRageofShinnAsukafinalcutSBV.jpg
yea and thats bout it so if you want plz leve a comment if u think my update is better than the first one or commment about other things
Mmm, the extracting and such has improved a little in the second version but it still could be better.
I don't like either the composition of the wall, I find it's too full and it can tire you if you see it a lot (when you use it in your own desktop), maybe you could try reducing the pic and leaving some free space.
I agree with Kazahaya that the wallpaper looks a bit too "busy", it makes it unclear and unfocussed. I do like some of the half-opacity images showing action, like the bit in the top left corner. Anyway good effort and don't take it the wrong way, I made one very similar to this on another anime too when I was first learning how to use Photoshop
its not about the extracting or anything like that, its simply because he is using screenshots and they are forbidden to use in mt...
* Like PAPTIMUS said, using screenshots is not allowed here at MT. Since you almost always have to blow them up to fit the screen, they're almost always very very low quality. Notice in this one the extreme blurring and artifacting. If you want to use an image from a screenshot, you'll have to vector trace it. Otherwise, I suggest you find a good, clean scan to use instead.
* Have to agree with Shujaa about the busy/unfocused composition. Images on low opacity in the bg are also usually not allowed at MT. They're considered a low effort way to fill in space. I suggest you try another effect instead. It sort looks like you're going the abstract way. So, look at some walls whose style you like, choose where you want to go, experiment with some tutorials, download some brushes, and practice.
Hope this helps.
Er... I don't see how getting CS2 should make any difference in the wall unless you were using anything below PS 3 (where there was no such thing as layers). Most of the new features just makes it less complicated to do certian stuff. But all in all, it is still do-able.
The best extraction tool would have to be the pen tool. Good vectoring skills will ensure that you have an image without jagged edges. Practice vectorising and you would not have problems with extraction. It is tedious at the start but the effort pays off.
As said earlier, the wall is to busy. You will have to direct the viewer's attention to a focal. If you want to ues lots of screen shots, then maybe use a flimstrip effect (of course your screenshots have to be good quality).
You laugh , i cry when i see your wallies . Not because i like ShinnxStellar but Shinn's face make me really feel sad . I hate Stellar ... Ok, however , that's the way you make them . The second looks more clearly . But cuz there're only screenshots so maybe not really nice . Too much scenes make it hard to see . Ah not the problem they're all Shinn's emotion so it really impressed .
I believe that the couple of Stellar and Shin are very very very sweet. I love it. He really wants to make she feel dear. And she wants to be loved. Your wall is beautiful
It does look sorta busy... but I just love the effect it gives cuz Shinn had sooooo much on his mind at that time... awesome!