This is the wallpaper I made of Kazuma. I used a thick black line to contrast
colors, and emphasize Kazuma's picture. I don't know how does the background
looks. What do you think?
Well, the image is a bit small to say much, but just a few thoughts.
* The image looks a bit over-textured, to the point where it just looks...dirty,
like dust. This is especially noticeable around the chara's head.
* You should probably get rid of the border. The computer acts as a natural
frame, so adding another one just cuts off the image. Also, having the text on
the border seperates it too much from the piece.
You should really upload a fullsize version of your wall if you really want
consise constructive comments. From the curent size we can't see to comment on
details like missed marks and picture extraction.
From what I can see there is far to much pattern on the character, he does
appear to be dirty. More translucensy for the pattern overlay layer could just
perfect the atmosphere for your wall.
I really don't mind the black border around the top half of the picture. But I
think that if you made a clean edge and stopped it on the right side of the wall
it would look better, remove it from the bottom edge of the wall. Perhaps you
could rearrange the text Kasuma so that you could fit the KareKano text, in a
much smaller font, underneath Kazuma's name.
This is the wallpaper I made of Kazuma. I used a thick black line to contrast colors, and emphasize Kazuma's picture. I don't know how does the background looks. What do you think?
http://i37.photobucket.com/albums/e92/Ararekaku/Frescofinal.jpg
Well, the image is a bit small to say much, but just a few thoughts.
* The image looks a bit over-textured, to the point where it just looks...dirty, like dust. This is especially noticeable around the chara's head.
* You should probably get rid of the border. The computer acts as a natural frame, so adding another one just cuts off the image. Also, having the text on the border seperates it too much from the piece.
Hope this helps.
You should really upload a fullsize version of your wall if you really want consise constructive comments. From the curent size we can't see to comment on details like missed marks and picture extraction.
From what I can see there is far to much pattern on the character, he does appear to be dirty. More translucensy for the pattern overlay layer could just perfect the atmosphere for your wall.
I really don't mind the black border around the top half of the picture. But I think that if you made a clean edge and stopped it on the right side of the wall it would look better, remove it from the bottom edge of the wall. Perhaps you could rearrange the text Kasuma so that you could fit the KareKano text, in a much smaller font, underneath Kazuma's name.
Hope that helps