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In The Midst of Shadows wallie of Bleach

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Well, this wallie was deleted by myself after i received the comment bout this wallie from Devildude earlier. I can't submit any artworks which is not made by me and this wallie was made by a good friend of mine as my birthday present. I already asked my friend,LXF permission to display it on Mt and the only place i could display it was probably here in Sandbox forum. Unfortunately, she have no intentions to join Mt at this moment because her studies just started off recently and she have no extra time to surf the net. Even though, she is busy at the moment but she did made a wallie just for the sake of me. I am very grateful of what she done and i would appreciate all her effort in making this wonderful wallie by displaying it in Mt. By doing so I hope someone would comment bout this wallie and I will certainly reply it back to her! I wish the comments that she'll be receiving would be able to improve her skills as well and for those people who did comment bout this wallie, I would be grateful for their helps also.

Please do comment bout this wallie!
Thanks you sooooooo MUCH!

PS: Thanks to Devildude for the comment bout this wallie earlier!

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  • bluSake
  • Retired Moderator
  • 2y 25wk ago

It's good that you understand the ripping policy :) However, there are other compositional concerns that I'd like to point out:

* The bg looks like a radial blurred stock photo (just a guess) If a waller uses a stock photo, MT expects him/her to put effort into editing that stock photo (though over-filtering is not advisable either) or on other aspects of the wallpaper, such as vectoring.

* The only other element is the red stripe and the text. Sorry to say it, but it looks a bit low effort. Some more originality with the text and some brushing might have improved the composition.

Hope this helps. :)

Nice scan of the character and I'm agree with blusake says abt the bg, it's obviously radial blurred em, simple :) and I think that some retouches for the bg can make this wallies lookin good. But anyway Byakuya still looking Cool XD .

Mmm... I agree with the bg point BluSake has made. Perhaps you can change the bg to an abstract one if you do not know how to make a 'realistic' or 'digital bg'. Abstract are made much more easily if you have a wide variety of brushes. For the best brushes I advice you to visit devianart.

~TripleG

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