I like the concept - you words pose a very good point for Lust - she is a
fantastic character - there needs to be more Lust in the world... ahha by that I
mean the character drawings etc. XP
OooOOoo.. i liek the texture of the wall
pretty cool ne yeahh i kinda agree with sharinganknight too. the character is kinda
small..making the wallie empty..
the fints are nice but it's
scattered..
anyway GANBATE! Q(^^Q) keep it up!1
ur doing great!
Like akazookin also said, the text is a bit scattered. Scattered elements in
walls can be distracting from the main image. So what I recommend is that you
focus the text in one place.
I guess you scattered the text to fill in the empty space, but if you use a
larger vector of Lust you should have no problem filling space.
Mmm, the background is pretty nice, nice use of abstract and grunge brushes, no
complains about it.
About the vector, i dont need to point that the vector can be bigger and look
better,maybe you can make it cover almost all the right part, then just blend
it.
The text, i think the font dont fit with the background,something more classic
like Times can make the trick, also like blue sake says, you can focus the text
in one place, something like:
Lust [Big text]
Where will i go...when i die...? [Small text you can add some fancy effect to
it]
Hope it helps and hope you get what i mean. Good luck
It looks alright to me. The background of the wall fits in with Lusts
personality and background. Other than that i'd give it a A-Ok 8 rating. Also
the character image could be a bit bigger.
well i've worked on this one for some while, it's lust from Full metal alchemist
i vectored her and tried making somthing, but i'm kinda repeativ
but what do you guys think of it?
if you want you could rate it from 0 to 10
edited i made it into a 1600x1200 size now, and made the vector bigger to
the BG is abit different, but still the same colour and brushes i guess
here it is, vote this one
(i just rezised it ABIT, so it could upload it)
what do you think?
seems great, i love the textured feel the brushes give the character. My only complaint is that Lust herself is way to small.
Hm...I think I'd like to see the text more streamlined; for now it looks a bit scattered.
& ::vector propoganda:: If you're going to vector, why not make a larger wall?
looks good so fare tell me when its done k?
to small?
well i can make it bigger for the people on the net( i my self will use it in a smaller form)
and blusake what do you mean wit hstreamed lines ?
(my english is dont so good so i dont understand everything, like some words i dont know)
any other advice to mke it better?
I like the concept - you words pose a very good point for Lust - she is a fantastic character - there needs to be more Lust in the world... ahha by that I mean the character drawings etc. XP
Can't wait to see the end
OooOOoo.. i liek the texture of the wall
yeahh i kinda agree with sharinganknight too. the character is kinda
small..making the wallie empty..
pretty cool ne
the fints are nice
but it's
scattered..
anyway GANBATE! Q(^^Q) keep it up!1
ur doing great!
Like akazookin also said, the text is a bit scattered. Scattered elements in walls can be distracting from the main image. So what I recommend is that you focus the text in one place.
I guess you scattered the text to fill in the empty space, but if you use a larger vector of Lust you should have no problem filling space.
the sign is too small, and the chara should cover more of the wall so that it wouldn't look that empty.
Mmm, the background is pretty nice, nice use of abstract and grunge brushes, no complains about it.
About the vector, i dont need to point that the vector can be bigger and look better,maybe you can make it cover almost all the right part, then just blend it.
The text, i think the font dont fit with the background,something more classic like Times can make the trick, also like blue sake says, you can focus the text in one place, something like:
Lust [Big text]
Where will i go...when i die...? [Small text you can add some fancy effect to it]
Hope it helps and hope you get what i mean. Good luck
It looks alright to me. The background of the wall fits in with Lusts personality and background. Other than that i'd give it a A-Ok 8 rating. Also the character image could be a bit bigger.