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Apocripha/0 wallpaper rejected. What do you think?

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Did I use to much or the orinanal scan?

Apocripha/0 wallpaper rejected. What do you think?

Did I use to much or the orinanal scan?

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<center>
<a href="http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h67/Anfaidora/dsft78yerthjdss8487copy.jpg" target="_blank">
<img src="http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h67/Anfaidora/th_dsft78yerthjdss8487copy.jpg"></a>
</center>

Here is the wallpaper. So should I save it? I know its not the best, and I have some ideas to make it better in the future. What things do you guys think I should keep, and or get rid of? I plan to get rid of the space back grounds, and put some new ones that look better, and match the image more. I also am going to work on the fog that is in the bottom left corner. I may get rid of the sparkles to. So tell me what you guys think, I'm all ears :).

merged: 03-25-2006 ~ 12:17pm
Sorry about my poor spelling in some places -_-.

merged: 03-25-2006 ~ 12:30pm
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h67/Anfaidora/th_dsft78yerthjdss8487copy.jpg

Heres a link that will work. Sorry not trying to spam.

whoa..that's a small wallpaper...but i love the theme of it. very creative too :) that link isn't the original size right? O_o if it is that wall wouldn't fit on my screen. it would too pixelized. unless you or someone else have those mini laptops, which are really cute XD

back to the wall, the font, i would change. i can barely read the font in the center of the wall. i can see what you trying to do and i think you're doing a great job in doing so. just keep it up :)

now let's rap it up XD (the following do not mean any offense to the reader/waller):

-size <--- i dunno if the link was the actual size or not, so this might not be a problem
-font

that's pretty much it, from what i can see...everything else is just great. when you edit and (re)submit your wallie, you can count on my fave and great comment :D

as for the poll, i don't know what to vote for, i don't know what you mean...

Thanks and that wasn't the original size. For some reason was made smaller when I got the link from Photobucket. The original size was 1280 X 1024. I will have to see if I can get the original size up. :)

merged: 03-25-2006 ~ 03:52pm
Ok I got it to it's original size now. Here's the link. http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h67/Anfaidora/th_dsft78yerthytuytjdss8487copy.jpg

  • bluSake
  • Retired Moderator
  • 2y 29wk ago

Part of the problem is that you used too much of the scan; it doesn't seem like you added much. A couple other things:

* The colors of the sky and fog are a bit off. They don't match the scan, especially the red of the sky.

* The text doesn't fit well. The lines are scattered and don't have much substance. The one in the center espeically disrupts the image more than it adds to the composition.

Hope this helps. :)

It does, thank you very much for your feedback :).

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