Im not sure exactly why Bot decided to delete this? I worked on it for about 3
hours and used several layers to make the background. the central figure took
forever to extract and I really did put effort into it. Is it really too
simplistic?
You seem to have put in effort on the effects, but the quality of its asthetic
value isn't there.
1. The white highlight of the word 'boogiepop' is glaring and sticks out like a
sore thumb since it does not blend in with the effects, whilst the word
'phantom' seems left out, when they are supposed to be together.
2. The effects have overshadowed or overlapped on the face of the character. The
amount of light of the effects and the amount of light on the face do not match
at all. Therefore lighting looks very out of proportion.
I agree with AWOL: the effects are nice, but the overall wall is
lacking
* The extraction of the chara image on the right is iffy: the edges are
overblurred. The black shadow doesn't help, since it seperates the chara from
the bg.
* The text doesn't blend well with the bg. I suggest starting by moving the 2
lines a bit closer together.
* Ghosting (putting another, usually larger, chara image in the bg to fill
space) is probably the biggest problem. Ghosting is considered low effort, and
looks messy. Instead of using a head shot to fill space, I suggest using some
brushes.
Im not sure exactly why Bot decided to delete this? I worked on it for about 3 hours and used several layers to make the background. the central figure took forever to extract and I really did put effort into it. Is it really too simplistic?
You seem to have put in effort on the effects, but the quality of its asthetic value isn't there.
1. The white highlight of the word 'boogiepop' is glaring and sticks out like a sore thumb since it does not blend in with the effects, whilst the word 'phantom' seems left out, when they are supposed to be together.
2. The effects have overshadowed or overlapped on the face of the character. The amount of light of the effects and the amount of light on the face do not match at all. Therefore lighting looks very out of proportion.
I agree with AWOL: the effects are nice, but the overall wall is lacking
* The extraction of the chara image on the right is iffy: the edges are overblurred. The black shadow doesn't help, since it seperates the chara from the bg.
* The text doesn't blend well with the bg. I suggest starting by moving the 2 lines a bit closer together.
* Ghosting (putting another, usually larger, chara image in the bg to fill space) is probably the biggest problem. Ghosting is considered low effort, and looks messy. Instead of using a head shot to fill space, I suggest using some brushes.
Hope this helps.
excuse me but I only liked even the effect in the center of the image think the remaining has to get better a lot.