My second poem!
I like moody, depressing poems
Well here it goes

A crumbled piece of paper floated down the street
Like my heart it was going with the wind
To nowhere...
I'm lost within
The weird flashbacks of my past...
Pain and sorrows from my childhood...
Never goes away
Memories are lost in the dark corner of my mind
I'm confused...
Should I cry?
Or should I smile?
I try to cry and blood pours down my eyes
I try to smile but I'm drenched in misery
Who is that boy in my blurry memory?
Black robe he wears and purple hood he has
Who is he?
He laughs but I see tears in his eyes
What is he?
His coal black eyes stares at the dead sunflower
Lost and confused like me
The flashback fades...
Like my soul

Not too bad... At least it's easy to understand what you are trying to mean in the poem...

wow
Nice very nice

very good my friend. and i understand it too. i like it and wish icould fav it

that's a very good poem, i get what you're trying to say

Yes I really like this poem. Such strong feelings.

that is a good one.....cont to write more!

wow.. your poem is easy to understand....

a sad poem...

A deep poem Vaticansan, and a rather imposing one too. It's like, putting emotions into images, rather dark, but eerily beautiful images. Good work! ^^