Heehee well it's been soo long since I made another poem and I'm back weeeeeeee
^^ heehee this poem is really very special to me cause this is like my point of
view when I met someone very special and this poem is dedicated to my love, Erik
^_^
We were both strangers
With totally different attitudes and personalities
From here and there
We both know nothing about each other
But as time passed,
Strangers turned to friends,
Who shares the same qualities, likes and dislikes
We started to talk ad know more about each other
Slowly, friends turned to close friends,
Who helps each other in times of loneliness
Who show each other happiness,
Through laughter and tears...
Days and weeks passed,
Both felt something...something new and nice...
Both felt strong feelings for each other,
Both felt love...
Close friends turned to lovers,
Who shares their love for each other
Who stayed strong in time of problems
Who love each other tenderly...
We may be both be afar,
But one thing we know...
Our hearts are connected together...
Always and forever...
This is a nice one.. ^^ .. a love poem that doesn't end in tragedy or something
along that line.. I like the flow of this one, the words seem to be perfectly
chosen, making them blend into each other. A very good poem I say..
Heehee well it's been soo long since I made another poem and I'm back weeeeeeee ^^ heehee this poem is really very special to me cause this is like my point of view when I met someone very special and this poem is dedicated to my love, Erik ^_^
We were both strangers
With totally different attitudes and personalities
From here and there
We both know nothing about each other
But as time passed,
Strangers turned to friends,
Who shares the same qualities, likes and dislikes
We started to talk ad know more about each other
Slowly, friends turned to close friends,
Who helps each other in times of loneliness
Who show each other happiness,
Through laughter and tears...
Days and weeks passed,
Both felt something...something new and nice...
Both felt strong feelings for each other,
Both felt love...
Close friends turned to lovers,
Who shares their love for each other
Who stayed strong in time of problems
Who love each other tenderly...
We may be both be afar,
But one thing we know...
Our hearts are connected together...
Always and forever...
oooOOOo i love it
lots
of happiness and love in this
wish i could fav this cuz if i could i would
keep it up i look forward to more
This is a nice one.. ^^ .. a love poem that doesn't end in tragedy or something along that line.. I like the flow of this one, the words seem to be perfectly chosen, making them blend into each other. A very good poem I say..
^^ a very nice poem indeed
Hello too! A really nice poem, though lots of ellipses... <--Like this.
It's been a while too.
heehee okie ^^ thank you for the comments ^^
seems more storylike than a poem o.O
glad to see u writing again :P