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My Newest Wall : DREAMING SO DEEP

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Well that's my newest wallie that i'm gonna submit , but i need to hear your opinions about it.CRITICS AND ADVICES WELCOME ! :) Thanks a lot for al of comments :)
http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e140/Mijagi/dddd.jpg

Make it bigger. Is that grey line next to her left foot supposed to be there, or am I just seeing things?

Otherwise, not bad. But then, I don't make wallies. I may not have any idea what I'm talking about.

wow it looks very nice! but i think it looks a little too plain. maybe you should add some seagulls around her or something, or make it looks like there is a bit of land under her, with small mountains or whatever. good luck!

you could make the image sharper and perhaps lighten the top right corner? otherwise, i really like the charac.

Yea maybe posting a full view version of the wall would help with suggestions? It's slightly hard to tell from the thumb, but maybe some text is all you need...

  • bluSake
  • Retired Moderator
  • 2y 17wk ago

I'm not sure about the ghosts; they create too straight of a line through the image and distract from the main. It's hard to tell from the thumb, but I think the main image is the only one you need for a striking wall.

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