Here is here.
Here is where we stand.
Right here, right now.
In this very place.
Here
Here where we stand.
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And there's the shortest poem I've ever made. I don't think it's as good as the
others, but I thought I'd post it anyway. Some of you might not believe what
inspired meh.. comment plz
It is very good to stand "stand up" for yourself.
Stand up to defend in what you believe is right.
Yes, dont look back into the past.
Yet by just standing is not enough, we need to move forward.
We need to pust ourselves forward.
Push through our limited abilities to achive
Perfection and Quality.
I really like this! It leaves everything up in the air as to how to decipher the
meaning!
...as soon as I get my journal from English class back from my teacher (in
AUGUST! >:~~~0), I'll share a poem with you that reminds me of this one... if
I forget... please... be the one to remind me...
Thanks for sharing!
Nice and great! Loved how you repeated the words ^_^ This has rather... a lot
meannings, depending on how one interprets it, mmmm :] It also sounds like a
song o.o I think my way of reading... its kinda weird...lol
And a random poem i made...in conjunction to yours.... xD
here we are
looking back
at the skies
that once hold glory
And its gd that you shared it....or we'll never have the chance of enjoying it
Here Where We Stand
Here.
Here we stand.
In this place, alone.
Here.
Where is here?
Here is here.
Here is where we stand.
Right here, right now.
In this very place.
Here
comment plz
Here where we stand.
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And there's the shortest poem I've ever made. I don't think it's as good as the others, but I thought I'd post it anyway. Some of you might not believe what inspired meh..
It is very good to stand "stand up" for yourself.
Stand up to defend in what you believe is right.
Yes, dont look back into the past.
Yet by just standing is not enough, we need to move forward.
We need to pust ourselves forward.
Push through our limited abilities to achive
Perfection and Quality.
You da man =}
I really like this! It leaves everything up in the air as to how to decipher the meaning!
...as soon as I get my journal from English class back from my teacher (in AUGUST! >:~~~0), I'll share a poem with you that reminds me of this one... if I forget... please... be the one to remind me...
Thanks for sharing!
Nice and great! Loved how you repeated the words ^_^ This has rather... a lot meannings, depending on how one interprets it, mmmm :] It also sounds like a song o.o I think my way of reading... its kinda weird...lol
And a random poem i made...in conjunction to yours.... xD
here we are
looking back
at the skies
that once hold glory
And its gd that you shared it....or we'll never have the chance of enjoying it
very nice
somehow i think it'll make a goos song
merged: 06-24-2006 ~ 01:02am
good*
Rock on rituel!
wow, short sweet and to the point, very good for a small poem
simple but good my friend....
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Uh......... Wow... It's so logical! Love it