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-My Hime- anyone interested in a Natsuki's wallpaper ?

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Minitokyo » Culture & Entertainment Fora » The Sandbox  -My Hime- anyone interested in a Natsuki's wallpaper ?

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Well, this My Hime wallpaper has been online t Minitokyo for a few weeks -monthes ?- before it was deleted because of its simplicity.

it's quite a shame since i like it (even if it's simple... at least it leaves the deskop visible :hmpf:) and since it was one of my most successful wallpapers (yep, my standards are not that high :sweat:)

well, it's called Trouble ahead (guess why ? ;)) and i hope some of you will like it !

http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/113/troublesahead1gt.th.jpg

http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/113/troublesahead1gt.jpg

It is a bit too simple. the bg looks really bland and dull compared to the scan.
The bg is really blurry and the filters you added to the wall don't really fit with the scan. ( Not saying you shouldn't use filter on your walls. ) Add something else to the bg, I'm not really surewhat though.
The lines at the bottom don't need to be there.
The text at the bottom could be changed to a different font. The text on the top could also be removed.
Another suggestion I have for the bg is a cafe scene. If you can, try finding a stock photo/picture of a cafe inside and vector it.

I think your composition is fine, in where the character is placed. but I think the reason it was deleted was because the background is made justing using filters.

@ # MapleRose:

you're right ! ;)

it was deleted mainly because of its filtered background.
sometimes i like to use wallpapers with an almost empty background because i've the habit of putting all new files on my desktop which is always in mess.

empty backgrounds help me to see what's on my desktop. :)

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