Actually the title is from the Shingetsutan Tsukihime (my fav anime)
novel....
Hope u like it and don't sin
In that garden where death flows
Where roses are dry
Where no life can bloom
A field where darkness lies
Where blood drops from the tree top
There is a tombstone among the dead flowers...
It tells a story about humanity's sin
Dread and misery is engraved on that stone
From the genesis it has recorded all sin
It will forever write down all wrong doings
Eternity is soaked in the evil of this world
Like this garden the world and it's inhabitants has no hope of life...
The cold deserted world will be abandoned in the end and will fall into a
grave
There next to the grave, the tombstone will tell...
Humanity's evil sin and transgression...
This one is definitely deeper than the one I read before ^-^ According to the
time, you wrote this one before that
Anyway---I personally prefer this one---it speaks to me. It is a little
depressing, but I do think it has some truths. This may be my personal
interpretation, but I think the poem's saying we've been doomed since the
beginning, hence we are doomed. Humans will be extinct one day, probably long
before our solar system goes off.
Wow! Vatican-kun!
Did you really write this? i think we have a new Pulitzer winner!
This was really deep, I bet i could have never written something like
it.
Actually the title is from the Shingetsutan Tsukihime (my fav anime) novel....
Hope u like it and don't sin
In that garden where death flows
Where roses are dry
Where no life can bloom
A field where darkness lies
Where blood drops from the tree top
There is a tombstone among the dead flowers...
It tells a story about humanity's sin
Dread and misery is engraved on that stone
From the genesis it has recorded all sin
It will forever write down all wrong doings
Eternity is soaked in the evil of this world
Like this garden the world and it's inhabitants has no hope of life...
The cold deserted world will be abandoned in the end and will fall into a grave
There next to the grave, the tombstone will tell...
Humanity's evil sin and transgression...
This one's pretty deep.
You know, the topic has death and human sin involved in it.
You should write more. ^^; After all, you are pretty good at it.
i agree with justice48 on this as well... deep and you should write more.. your good
This one is definitely deeper than the one I read before ^-^ According to the time, you wrote this one before that
Anyway---I personally prefer this one---it speaks to me. It is a little
depressing, but I do think it has some truths. This may be my personal
interpretation, but I think the poem's saying we've been doomed since the
beginning, hence we are doomed. Humans will be extinct one day, probably long
before our solar system goes off.
Wow! Vatican-kun!
Did you really write this? i think we have a new Pulitzer winner!
This was really deep, I bet i could have never written something like it.
Congratulations!