Hmm, very nicely done, though the text is too difficult to read; you may want to
darken the shadow around it. Other than that, just explain who the characters
are, and you've a wonderful wallpaper, here!
You know that MT accepts only wallpapers going from 1024 x 768 and above,
right?
The wallpaper looks really good, especially if it's your first one. However, I
think that the text looks really out of place where you put it. It would look
better in the upper-left corner, or close to the corner, anyway. And also, pay a
little bit more attention to the words - correctly, it would be "I'll be
waiting for you until the night comes" (not "untill" and
"come" -- or maybe there was a tiny 's' there and I missed it? ).
Anyway, if you make it 1024 x 768 and change the text, I think you should have
no problems in posting it to the gallery Good
luck!
It's a bit difficult to say a lot about this wallpaper because the resolution is
so small that you can not see any details. I cannot really tell from here
whether the extraction of the scan is clean... but as far as I can see it now...
that seems to be okay.
I agree with the two others concerning the text... First get rid of the typo
with "until" and if you want to add text then it should be readable.
So yes I also agree with Odeena to move it a little the "s" of comes
interferes with the character. It looks a bit weird when only a "s" of
the text is mixed with the character and furthermore you can hardly see it. So
moving it a bit more to the left would certainly be good.
What I may also recommend is experimenting a little with the Brightness of your
wallpaper. Part of why the letters are so hard to read is because there is such
a strong white in the middle. So try to play around with the Brightness in
photoshop... (you can find it when you go to Image and then Adjustments)
Apart from that I think you did quite well for your first wallpaper. So
good luck with finishing it and feel free to ask if you have further questions!
^^ I hope my comment was of some help...
Thank you all, I was very upset 'cuz I thought it was a little shit... '' But
I really think I brightned too mush the words, I'll pay more attention next
time... =p
Yes, I wrote "Untill midnight comes...", but it's hard to see, isn't?
xDD The resolution is 800x600, but it's because I was unaware about the "at
least 1024x768" thing. Now I'm not going to do so tiny walls anymore...
(and my resolution IS 800x600...)
Glad you liked it a bit! xD
Just like everyone said, it's a little hard to see. The girl's a little too
washed out, and the white... thing between the two characters is really hard to
distinguish. What is that?
Well, I did it today (it was tha wall I posted some time ago), but it was too tiny to MT accept...
Now I'm thinking here if they would accept my work:
http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/1363/ultinmidnightnt2.jpg
What do you guys think? o_o
*my first wall, you can flame it... xDD
Hmm, very nicely done, though the text is too difficult to read; you may want to darken the shadow around it. Other than that, just explain who the characters are, and you've a wonderful wallpaper, here!
You know that MT accepts only wallpapers going from 1024 x 768 and above, right?
The wallpaper looks really good, especially if it's your first one. However, I think that the text looks really out of place where you put it. It would look better in the upper-left corner, or close to the corner, anyway. And also, pay a little bit more attention to the words - correctly, it would be "I'll be waiting for you until the night comes" (not "untill" and "come" -- or maybe there was a tiny 's' there and I missed it?
).
Anyway, if you make it 1024 x 768 and change the text, I think you should have no problems in posting it to the gallery
Good
luck!
It's a bit difficult to say a lot about this wallpaper because the resolution is so small that you can not see any details. I cannot really tell from here whether the extraction of the scan is clean... but as far as I can see it now... that seems to be okay.
I agree with the two others concerning the text... First get rid of the typo with "until" and if you want to add text then it should be readable. So yes I also agree with Odeena to move it a little the "s" of comes interferes with the character. It looks a bit weird when only a "s" of the text is mixed with the character and furthermore you can hardly see it. So moving it a bit more to the left would certainly be good.
What I may also recommend is experimenting a little with the Brightness of your wallpaper. Part of why the letters are so hard to read is because there is such a strong white in the middle. So try to play around with the Brightness in photoshop... (you can find it when you go to Image and then Adjustments)
Apart from that I think you did quite well for your first wallpaper.
So
good luck with finishing it and feel free to ask if you have further questions!
^^ I hope my comment was of some help...
Thank you all, I was very upset 'cuz I thought it was a little shit...
'' But
I really think I brightned too mush the words, I'll pay more attention next
time... =p 
(and my resolution IS 800x600...)
Yes, I wrote "Untill midnight comes...", but it's hard to see, isn't? xDD The resolution is 800x600, but it's because I was unaware about the "at least 1024x768" thing. Now I'm not going to do so tiny walls anymore...
Glad you liked it a bit! xD
overall it's actually pretty nice, though I usually don't look at these styles
anywayz, like they said, the words are "really" ~stressing~ hard to see... otherwise, it's nice
Just like everyone said, it's a little hard to see. The girl's a little too washed out, and the white... thing between the two characters is really hard to distinguish. What is that?