Heres a Strawberry Panic! wallie I've been working on. Please let me know if its
still needs work and some ideas on making it better. If you think its of posting
quality, please let me know as well. Saddly there are only 3 wallpapers of this
series, Im trying to improve that.
First of all, I would recommend you upload your wall onto
[url=http://www.imageshack.us], because deviantart doesn't allow direct links to
the images (you can link to the deviation html file though).
But from what I can see from the thumbnail, the characters look all right, and
the background is fine (maybe some colour adjustments so the green grass isn't
so bright and clash with the pink flowers so much). But the text effects aren't
necessary. The gradients don't have to be there, it's just distracting and draws
your focus away from the characters.
yaaay that text is sooo muchie better =D! and the colour is beautiful aswell..
well changed =)! okay.. i cant place it.. but there's something i dont like
about that picture ><! i dont know what it is.. but.. it turns me off
looking at it.. if that makes sense? like your other wallie.. quickly attracted
me to click it.. but i cant say the same for this one =\ hmm.. it'll come to me
^^"
now i see.. the leaves are too blurred! i think
you should blur them UNDER a leaf that was sharply brushed. did you vector this?
if you vectored this, you did well.. maybe let's make the characters smaller a
little to give more beauty to the background.
The colour composition is a little dull. It would be great if you could change
the colour of their clothes (if it is possible) or darken the shadows from their
hair. The text colour looks better after changing. =)
Ok Ive been workin on this for over a week! Its a little differnent from the
original. I think its alot better. Ive made the characters smaller so you can
see the background more. I also changed the background to a lighter skyblue. I
feel it fits better now. I think its good enough now for summitting. Let me know
what you think. Arigato.
wooowie ^^ it's soo much more better! i havent seen the large view ^^; but.. so
far.. it looks really nice.. and if you post it up.. it'll be a definite fave
^__^ !
Sry about not having a larger view. ImageShack wasnt working for me last
night..GRRR..lol. I wanted to get it posted so I used Photobucket as a last
resort. lol. I had planed to comeback and repost it using ImageShack. But I
couldnt get back to it as soon as would have liked too. Stupid work..lol. Again
sry for the incovienience. So here it is. Enjoy.
merged: 11-22-2006 ~ 12:48pm
Thanks to everyone who helped in making this wallie. I have reached a point
where I am happy in the way it looks. I have decided to summit it to the
gallery. I hope everyone likes it. again.. Arigato!
Heres a Strawberry Panic! wallie I've been working on. Please let me know if its still needs work and some ideas on making it better. If you think its of posting quality, please let me know as well. Saddly there are only 3 wallpapers of this series, Im trying to improve that.
Larger version:
http://ic3.deviantart.com/fs11/i/2006/250/7/3/Forbidden_Love_by_SailorStac.jpg
First of all, I would recommend you upload your wall onto [url=http://www.imageshack.us], because deviantart doesn't allow direct links to the images (you can link to the deviation html file though).
But from what I can see from the thumbnail, the characters look all right, and the background is fine (maybe some colour adjustments so the green grass isn't so bright and clash with the pink flowers so much). But the text effects aren't necessary. The gradients don't have to be there, it's just distracting and draws your focus away from the characters.
Yea text was distracting. As much as I liked it.. it need to go..lol. I think this text is more suttle.
yaaay that text is sooo muchie better =D! and the colour is beautiful aswell.. well changed =)! okay.. i cant place it.. but there's something i dont like about that picture ><! i dont know what it is.. but.. it turns me off looking at it.. if that makes sense? like your other wallie.. quickly attracted me to click it.. but i cant say the same for this one =\ hmm.. it'll come to me ^^"
now i see.. the leaves are too blurred!
i think
you should blur them UNDER a leaf that was sharply brushed. did you vector this?
if you vectored this, you did well.. maybe let's make the characters smaller a
little to give more beauty to the background.
The colour composition is a little dull. It would be great if you could change the colour of their clothes (if it is possible) or darken the shadows from their hair. The text colour looks better after changing. =)
Ok Ive been workin on this for over a week! Its a little differnent from the original. I think its alot better. Ive made the characters smaller so you can see the background more. I also changed the background to a lighter skyblue. I feel it fits better now. I think its good enough now for summitting. Let me know what you think. Arigato.
wooowie ^^ it's soo much more better! i havent seen the large view ^^; but.. so far.. it looks really nice.. and if you post it up.. it'll be a definite fave ^__^ !
Sry about not having a larger view. ImageShack wasnt working for me last night..GRRR..lol. I wanted to get it posted so I used Photobucket as a last resort. lol. I had planed to comeback and repost it using ImageShack. But I couldnt get back to it as soon as would have liked too. Stupid work..lol. Again sry for the incovienience. So here it is. Enjoy.
merged: 11-22-2006 ~ 12:48pm
Thanks to everyone who helped in making this wallie. I have reached a point where I am happy in the way it looks. I have decided to summit it to the gallery. I hope everyone likes it. again.. Arigato!