It's just that I'm too stressed out because my exams are coming. I'm thinking
too much, I guess... Anyway, this is the result of too much thinking...
-The worst of my
fear-
As the author compose,
The tale telling our life,
Signified the beginning,
From when we saw each other,
For the first time but for sure,
We will be friends for life.
So...
Taking the first step,
You showed me the truth,
Brought me into the brotherhood,
Changing me into the man I should,
Along with everything you gave me,
I took it as a blessing from God.
And...
During the moments of needs,
I am ever there to aid,
Never abandoning you for the worst,
Being by your side as an accomplice,
If permitted so, My will,
Is to gladly take your place.
But...
Wondering if you still have me,
I gave it all but the best,
For I cannot carry on,
Without you being here,
There will be no light,
Only coldness, darkness and blandness.
Alas...
On my knees I prayed,
For I fear not the end is near,
But the vanity in my memory,
That tells our tales,
Should you ever forsaken me,
Is all I most fear of.
wwwooowww ianervan that was a great poem
i really liked ur use of literature to describe the worst of ur fear
..........two thumbs up
but i was just wondering if u r stressing about ur upcoming exams, why r u
writing poems when u should be studying .....just kiddin (laughs)
great writing
It's just that I'm too stressed out because my exams are coming. I'm thinking too much, I guess... Anyway, this is the result of too much thinking...
-The worst of my fear-
As the author compose,
The tale telling our life,
Signified the beginning,
From when we saw each other,
For the first time but for sure,
We will be friends for life.
So...
Taking the first step,
You showed me the truth,
Brought me into the brotherhood,
Changing me into the man I should,
Along with everything you gave me,
I took it as a blessing from God.
And...
During the moments of needs,
I am ever there to aid,
Never abandoning you for the worst,
Being by your side as an accomplice,
If permitted so, My will,
Is to gladly take your place.
But...
Wondering if you still have me,
I gave it all but the best,
For I cannot carry on,
Without you being here,
There will be no light,
Only coldness, darkness and blandness.
Alas...
On my knees I prayed,
For I fear not the end is near,
But the vanity in my memory,
That tells our tales,
Should you ever forsaken me,
Is all I most fear of.
That is all, please leave your commands
wwwooowww ianervan that was a great poem
i really liked ur use of literature to describe the worst of ur fear ..........two thumbs up
but i was just wondering if u r stressing about ur upcoming exams, why r u writing poems when u should be studying .....just kiddin (laughs)
great writing
dude ; thats amazing .
*applauds* very nice indeed please keep it up....