Mostly I just want to ask a question. I need opinions on whether this wallpaper is too risky for Minitokyo or not. All the important stuff is covered, but I'm still sort of worried. I put many, many hours of work into this and I really don't want to find out it was for nothing, but I have to ask anyway.

What do you guys think (especially mods and such)? Is it too risky?

<a href="http://img120.imageshack.us/my.php?image=oneplaceclosertonumbqp5.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/9258/oneplaceclosertonumbqp5.th.jpg" border="0" alt="Elfen Lied Wallpaper" /></a>

It would be better if it were a bit bigger so we could see...

There. I'm so sorry ^^;; Apparantly I got the wrong code from imageshack...

Ok, that's much better.
Personally, I would try to make the background look like it was painted, to go with the scan you chose. Also, lighting is also important. If you add, say a small moon, behind the window, you would have the girl sitting somewhat in the shadows, which would give the wall more depth and make the whole idea much sadder.
As for the font, the title is alright, but I wouldn't use that kind of font and I wouldn't make it that big.

Hm... U need a light source. I like to font :P but I can't decide if the image is from indoor or from outdoor. :| The light source would clear thing up.
The bg looks like a painting to me, it's a nice texture there .