It's okay I suppose but the background is a little plain. If you have a look at
some of the wallpapers that have been submitted to MT the backgrounds are a lot
more sophisticated than a gradient background with highlighted stars and a moon.
Such as:
Personally I've never seen 'Ah! Megami-sama' before. However, I suggest you try
to make the wallpaper as if it's telling a story. Like make it into a scene that
shows the characters at a summer night festival or something like that, rather
than have a plain gradient background.
Also, I'm not quite sure what you tried to do with the grass but it's obvious
that it was painted on using the scattering of that grass brush in Photoshop.
Grass is usually not in a uniform colour so try to vary it abit to make it look
believeable.
Hi!
I have a few ideas how you maybe could enhance it.
1. try adding a little structure on the heaven, a plain gradient
isn´t so nice^^
2. might be a stupid idea though, but if you "screen" an white/black
gradient on the grass, it may enhance the look...
Could be stupid ideas after all, but I thought I tell you anyway^^
Im not really sure why it got deleted from the gallery, I spent quite a bit of time on it. I just got the standard Bot reply so I have no clue.
It's okay I suppose but the background is a little plain. If you have a look at some of the wallpapers that have been submitted to MT the backgrounds are a lot more sophisticated than a gradient background with highlighted stars and a moon. Such as:
http://gallery.minitokyo.net/view/257762/
http://gallery.minitokyo.net/view/249128/
Personally I've never seen 'Ah! Megami-sama' before. However, I suggest you try to make the wallpaper as if it's telling a story. Like make it into a scene that shows the characters at a summer night festival or something like that, rather than have a plain gradient background.
Also, I'm not quite sure what you tried to do with the grass but it's obvious that it was painted on using the scattering of that grass brush in Photoshop. Grass is usually not in a uniform colour so try to vary it abit to make it look believeable.
I hope that helps.
Well I took some of the advise and this is what I came up with. Is it any better or am I going in completely the wrong direction?
i think that's better
Hi!
I have a few ideas how you maybe could enhance it.
1. try adding a little structure on the heaven, a plain gradient isn´t so nice^^
2. might be a stupid idea though, but if you "screen" an white/black gradient on the grass, it may enhance the look...
Could be stupid ideas after all, but I thought I tell you anyway^^
Here are some of the suggested changes. Hope it is an improvement. ^_^*
yup i agree its much better now..! ^.^