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Sailor Moon wallpaper.... comments please!

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Heres a Sailor Moon wallpaper I just created. Im looking for comments in general. Needs work? Good enough to be summited?
http://img86.imageshack.us/img86/4303/dreamingofthestarsgk2.th.jpg

not too bad, not really digging the outer glow you put on Sailor moon though, its a bit too hard.

Well i'm not sure what else you can do but just soften the outer glow around the edges of Sailor Moon or just rid of it and do something else. But its not too bad so far

hehe i luff the wings sorta effect ^_^ ! that's really pretty =D! not too keen on the outer glow with pink! maybe you could try something less obvious? like a creamish light colour? and hmm >.< the background.. is too plain! is there anything you can do to that? i'll come back checking for your improvements =P take care now, SailorStac! x

I personally don't like the wings, because they look kinda weird. Good work with the extraction and the outline looks alright. :) I think that you could be a bit more creative with the background, maybe more colors? Keep it up!

I think it's really pretty the wings are my favorite part. The stars add a nice touch and I reaaally like the colors you used the match the picture. Suggestions I'd say are change the background a bit. Like xmisaox said i think the background can have a little bit more but overall i like the wallpaper a lot :)

Hmmm,let me see...the wings are too colourful,white or light blue would suit Usagi,and then replace the pink outer glow with yellow instead and at the elements section,set the technique to softer or others that make the glow softer.Since your theme is 'Dreaming of the stars'...you should place her on something like a cloud or something because the stars are in the sky and the background colour should be of dark colour instead of bright pinkish purple.Maybe add a moon,because that signifies Sailor Moon and thats all I can say..I'm not sure if it'll help,it's just what I think.

The bg is a bit too boring, but other than that, I think it's fine :)

The extraction is done very well :) I like the scan you used,
here's what I think you should do;
Don't make the background so plain, especially if you want to submit it to MT, MT wants wallpapers that can really be appreciate it at least by someone xD
Make the wings maybe not so colorful, but I can see what you're trying to do with the color on the wings
personally I don't find the wings so bad, but some members have posted they do no like them x_x

Anyways, hope it helps :)

Forgive any bluntness. I'm not good with putting things gently, I'm afraid -.-;;

The wings AREN'T that bad. The real problem I wee with them is that they're (like everything else in the wall besides the scan) are in a pale pastellish color. The scan is not in this coloring. So everything seems off to me.

The background is very boring to me. Nothing is happening. It's just a gradient with a sprinkle of stars.

The glow does look weird and makes me wonder if you're trying to hide mistakes in the extraction with it (yeah, not that I've done that before >.>). If you are and absolutely can't get it right then I recommend a lighter colored, softer glow. If you aren't I recommend that anyway. Or getting rid of it altogether and finding a different way to focus your eyes on Sailor Moon.

These are my opinions so you can pick and choose what you want to listen to. Sorry if it sounds harsh...

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