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im pissed...so i figure id right...
so much fun
so much hate
such a world to appreciate
wether it good..weather it bad
we all become very sad
felling useless
feeling cold
theres no feeling to be fortold
watching others
and there sorows
youve now relized your just as hollow
so i tell you now.
and ill tell you later
your no better than the other
when when im done and finnaly gone
youve relised..this isnt just a poem
its life..and its cruel
full of sin and dispare
we are nothing and so are you...
(just...very sad and upset..)
I feel the same way. Hell doesn't exist.... because we're already in hell!~!~!~!
very nice poem....this is very nice... keep it up...
i think we have all felt this way at some point in time. very good poem
thanks..thou im feeling better and this poem aint really my style
very good poet and don't noet
its a good poem luckymouse sorry your sad though hope something good happens to cheer you up
i wuz m00ted too, but I know what you're saying by the poem...
its all in yer head tho...
Hell is a state of mind. ...and mine's too messed up to mention it out loud. Good poem.
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im pissed...so i figure id right...
so much fun
so much hate
such a world to appreciate
wether it good..weather it bad
we all become very sad
felling useless
feeling cold
theres no feeling to be fortold
watching others
and there sorows
youve now relized your just as hollow
so i tell you now.
and ill tell you later
your no better than the other
when when im done and finnaly gone
youve relised..this isnt just a poem
its life..and its cruel
full of sin and dispare
we are nothing and so are you...
(just...very sad and upset..)
I feel the same way. Hell doesn't exist.... because we're already in hell!~!~!~!
very nice poem....this is very nice...
keep it up...
i think we have all felt this way at some point in time.
very good poem
thanks..thou im feeling better and this poem aint really my style
very good poet and don't noet
its a good poem luckymouse sorry your sad though hope something good happens to cheer you up
i wuz m00ted too, but I know what you're saying by the poem...
its all in yer head tho...
Hell is a state of mind. ...and mine's too messed up to mention it out loud.
Good poem.