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im pissed...so i figure id right...


so much fun

so much hate

such a world to appreciate

wether it good..weather it bad

we all become very sad

felling useless

feeling cold

theres no feeling to be fortold

watching others

and there sorows

youve now relized your just as hollow

so i tell you now.

and ill tell you later

your no better than the other

when when im done and finnaly gone

youve relised..this isnt just a poem

its life..and its cruel

full of sin and dispare

we are nothing and so are you...


(just...very sad and upset..)

I feel the same way. Hell doesn't exist.... because we're already in hell!~!~!~!

very nice poem....this is very nice...
keep it up...

i think we have all felt this way at some point in time.
very good poem

thanks..thou im feeling better and this poem aint really my style

very good poet and don't noet

its a good poem luckymouse sorry your sad though hope something good happens to cheer you up :)

i wuz m00ted too, but I know what you're saying by the poem...

its all in yer head tho...

Hell is a state of mind. ...and mine's too messed up to mention it out loud.
Good poem.

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