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a tribute to all my ex gfs

laying beside you feeling your gently touch as i stroke your skin

so smooth..

so warm..

so fragil..

yet hiding so much sin..

a broken heart..

all never to be cured as you shake me away

shuttering at my thought..

gagging at my kiss..


my tender lips..wanting to feel yours..

my tender touch wanting to graze your body as it still pushes me away

looking thru your eyes..the hatred in me..

no love..no embrace.

just so much hate

so much cruelty at who i am..

at what i am..

so lonely..so lost...so scared..

heartless like the rest..but just wanting to be loved..

as i walk away never to see them again..


it is very nice...and really captures emotion...
nice work...though what inspires such work would surely not be so nice...
keep it up though...i hope you found relief in writing that poem...

heh..dont worry i plan on writing a romantic one soon haha

awwww lucky
very well written and i think we have all felt that at some point in time
love your poems cant wait to read more

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