HA! now this is more my style heeh ^^

a simple embrace..

a kiss to remember

these feelings so light

yet fragile as ever

as i look into her eyes

more beutilful than heaven..

and more open than the skys

nothing could end this

nothing could bother us

just you..me together forever

an eternity of happyness

and not a single day of sorrow

very nice lucky very sweet i like it alot you did a good job

its a really good poem luckymouse keep up the good work

haha told ya im better at these ^_-

yup i like it...didn't notice the poem whe you first added it but pretty neat poem...keep it up!

lawl

That' pretty cool ^_^ I write poetry every once in awhile, but it's not my strong point -.-'