The lighting against cagalli is a little to bright...
I dont really like the planet that is over another planet at the
background...
Cause it is making your wallpaper look weird... other than that it is hard to
comment about your other details cause your resolution is quite
small...
Oh yes the horizon... the one that divide the sky and the sea... you might want
to make it fade a little more ^_^
I think the biggest problem with this one is the fact that the scans of Cagalli
and Athrun are done in two different styles. Cagalli is done in the Destiny the
Edge style, that has a more shoujo and mature feel to it, and uses soft-cell and
airbrush shading, while Athrun is in the anime style with traditional
cell-shading and the original Hisashi Hirai style... so either find an image of
Athrun from the Edge, or an anime picture of Cagalli
The extraction looks passible, though the edges of Cagalli could use some
smoothing out. The image of Athrun, like others said, look a bit low quality,
looks like it came from a screencap, esp if you look at the red parts, there's
quite a bit pixelation.
the water looks too realistic (same with the moon), for the anime-style (esp the
cell-shading).
I kinda understand your idea, so maybe move Athrun left a little bit so that
he's more in the corner, and scale him down a bit. move Cagalli to the upper
right a bit more, and maybe lower the opacity so it seems like he's thinking
about her.
See what you can do to increase the quality of your scans first before you move
to the background
Hi Everyone!
Can I please have your comments/opinions about my wallie?
Thank you,
Alpha
The lighting against cagalli is a little to bright...
I dont really like the planet that is over another planet at the background...
Cause it is making your wallpaper look weird... other than that it is hard to comment about your other details cause your resolution is quite small...
Oh yes the horizon... the one that divide the sky and the sea... you might want to make it fade a little more ^_^
Actually the resolution is bigger it's just that I had to upload it on photobucket.
Try this:
merged: 12-04-2006 ~ 02:45pm
Please click once on the image to have it enlarged into it's original resolution.
I agree with asinine. Cagalli is a little to washed out as is Athrun to a lesser degree.
Both scans look quite poor quality, you might want to vector them. I also don't really like the text at the bottom.
Good luck!
I think the biggest problem with this one is the fact that the scans of Cagalli and Athrun are done in two different styles. Cagalli is done in the Destiny the Edge style, that has a more shoujo and mature feel to it, and uses soft-cell and airbrush shading, while Athrun is in the anime style with traditional cell-shading and the original Hisashi Hirai style... so either find an image of Athrun from the Edge, or an anime picture of Cagalli
The extraction looks passible, though the edges of Cagalli could use some smoothing out. The image of Athrun, like others said, look a bit low quality, looks like it came from a screencap, esp if you look at the red parts, there's quite a bit pixelation.
the water looks too realistic (same with the moon), for the anime-style (esp the cell-shading).
I kinda understand your idea, so maybe move Athrun left a little bit so that he's more in the corner, and scale him down a bit. move Cagalli to the upper right a bit more, and maybe lower the opacity so it seems like he's thinking about her.
See what you can do to increase the quality of your scans first before you move to the background