The scan seems neatly extracted but, though I like the colors, the bg... I
dunno. It's not simple, but it's not detailed enough for me (this is just my
opinion, obviously) so I think it'd be fine if you submitted it. Perhaps some
sort of gradient in the bg, so that it goes with the lighting of the scan?
Well, I'm not so good at telling others what would be better, since I'm not that
great a waller myself. But, I can tell you what I get out of it.
I was once told that a scan that is just cut and pasted into a wall isn't that
creative. I haven't had much success doing anything different though. Anyway,
the background has the matching color which reflects the mood of the scan and
the type of anime its from. I can see that there is a design in the background
that repeats itself in several places and they are blurred. To me, that would
seem like someone is dazed looking into a deep illusion. The image of the girl
seems to be the only thing clear enough to make out. In other words, it reminds
me of an attack. Can't say much more though.
My 2 cents worth -
Something with the background seems "missing", try improving on the
details.
Character is cleanly extracted, and pretty nicely blended in.
A blurred background and clear character makes it contrasting.
Overall, lacking in details... try adding more details and "substance"
to it, I'm sure it will turn out nicely.
I think its trying do too much at once, the scanlines, the blur effects the
generic text.
Maybe you should try having the background look as it its reacting to her, much
like visualisers react to changes in the music. That way Lucy wouldn't simply be
on top of the background, but rather blended into it. Try leaving a black area
around her then using the red lines to eccentualte her stance and position.
Here goes!
Wasn't really planning on submitting this since I was just playing around . . . so I decided to place this here. Comments would be much appreciated
Edit: Maybe I might just submit it afterall if it seems ok. ^^;
The scan seems neatly extracted but, though I like the colors, the bg... I dunno. It's not simple, but it's not detailed enough for me (this is just my opinion, obviously) so I think it'd be fine if you submitted it. Perhaps some sort of gradient in the bg, so that it goes with the lighting of the scan?
Ok, I'll see what I can change. Thanks for the comment
Well, I'm not so good at telling others what would be better, since I'm not that great a waller myself. But, I can tell you what I get out of it.
I was once told that a scan that is just cut and pasted into a wall isn't that creative. I haven't had much success doing anything different though. Anyway, the background has the matching color which reflects the mood of the scan and the type of anime its from. I can see that there is a design in the background that repeats itself in several places and they are blurred. To me, that would seem like someone is dazed looking into a deep illusion. The image of the girl seems to be the only thing clear enough to make out. In other words, it reminds me of an attack. Can't say much more though.
My 2 cents worth -
Something with the background seems "missing", try improving on the details.
Character is cleanly extracted, and pretty nicely blended in.
A blurred background and clear character makes it contrasting.
Overall, lacking in details... try adding more details and "substance" to it, I'm sure it will turn out nicely.
I think its trying do too much at once, the scanlines, the blur effects the generic text.
Maybe you should try having the background look as it its reacting to her, much like visualisers react to changes in the music. That way Lucy wouldn't simply be on top of the background, but rather blended into it. Try leaving a black area around her then using the red lines to eccentualte her stance and position.