if i had one wish its to be with you to feel your touch to see your smile to feel your lips touching mine..if i had one wish its to feel your heart beating with mine..if i had one wish its to be with you and only you cuz i now know deep down ill never find a girl to love me the way you do like you..if i had one wish..its for you

hmm such a nice poem...hahaha touching too...
thanks for sharing..it is very sweet...
Merry Christmas!

gee.....your words are great!

well i wouldnt go that far..i just do what comes natural heh

The words themselves aren't bad, they're pretty sweet. However, some punctuation and proper grammar would help (like using "because" or even " 'cause " instead of "cuz" , and proper capitalization on the "I"). Also, breaking it up into blocks/stanzas would make it look more like a poem rather than a long, run-on sentence, it would also add to the drama and create a pattern with the words you have (like starting each stanza with the same sentence). Eg:

" If I had one wish,
It's to be with you.
To feel your touch
To see your smile
To feel your lips touching mine.

If I had one wish,
It's to feel your heart beating with mine.

If I had one wish,
It's to be with you
And only you,
Because I now know deep down
I'll never find a girl
To love me
The way you do like you.

If I had one wish,
It's for you. "