Love eventually gives way to hatred,
And then hatred gives way to love.
Tell me which one came form hell,
And which one from up above?
Love just makes you into a fool,
And wrecks more souls than not.
But then hatred cradles you,
While your lifeless enemies rot.
Love can give you every reason to live,
But then make you want to die.
But hatred can also turn and backfire,
And over your dead body, none will cry.
So whether you want to hate to love,
Or if you live to love to hate.
We live to die, make up your mind,
Who will end this debate?
So while you sqaunder your precious life,
Deciding whether to hate or to love.
So while you begin to fade away,
Deciding if you'll go to hell or above.
Well, you wasted your precious life away,
While only wondering what to do.
I have learned from others about hate and love,
I will not abuse my limited time like you.
Hatred and love are a continous loop,
You won't find an answer at the end.
There is no true right and wrong,
Don't worry yourself with answers, just pretend.
So go on living and just don't care,
About hate, love, hell and above.
But still I cannot help but wonder,
What's better, Hatred or Love?
^YET AGAIN Thanks! Lol, this poem is saying how people ponder too much on what
to do next and what's the worst that can happen and in my opinion if it doesn't
involve jail time or death than you should just do it instead of squandering
your life. But the last line it signifies that I too have been done in my the
curiousity and am stuck in the loop and end up at the top which is a
never-ending loop of curiousity and unknowing and wasting time *catches breath*
i've had that problem before, when u think too much about what's gonna happen
next and then u realize that it's a waste of time to keep thinking about it and
just do it.
Hatred or Love?
Love eventually gives way to hatred,
And then hatred gives way to love.
Tell me which one came form hell,
And which one from up above?
Love just makes you into a fool,
And wrecks more souls than not.
But then hatred cradles you,
While your lifeless enemies rot.
Love can give you every reason to live,
But then make you want to die.
But hatred can also turn and backfire,
And over your dead body, none will cry.
So whether you want to hate to love,
Or if you live to love to hate.
We live to die, make up your mind,
Who will end this debate?
So while you sqaunder your precious life,
Deciding whether to hate or to love.
So while you begin to fade away,
Deciding if you'll go to hell or above.
Well, you wasted your precious life away,
While only wondering what to do.
I have learned from others about hate and love,
I will not abuse my limited time like you.
Hatred and love are a continous loop,
You won't find an answer at the end.
There is no true right and wrong,
Don't worry yourself with answers, just pretend.
So go on living and just don't care,
About hate, love, hell and above.
But still I cannot help but wonder,
What's better, Hatred or Love?
Interesting flow of words. ...very insightful and observant as well.
^YET AGAIN Thanks! Lol, this poem is saying how people ponder too much on what to do next and what's the worst that can happen and in my opinion if it doesn't involve jail time or death than you should just do it instead of squandering your life. But the last line it signifies that I too have been done in my the curiousity and am stuck in the loop and end up at the top which is a never-ending loop of curiousity and unknowing and wasting time *catches breath*
I know the feeling. The sting can be a bit bewildering at first, but I agree that you shouldn't let it waste your life.
*sighs* I know it to well
i've had that problem before, when u think too much about what's gonna happen next and then u realize that it's a waste of time to keep thinking about it and just do it.
a really good poem. thanks for sharing.
That poem was incredible with the right emotions for it, but what if someone loves to love?
^ Yah I thought about loving to love but it didn't fit in my poem so I had to make it vice versa.
True it wouldn't fit, but what I said makes just as much sence cause trust me I've had problems with love lately.
Oh wow. That poem was wonderful! Congrats on being good in the arts!
Interesting^^ Good job lilwoldmaiden s@n! ^^ hehe but I'm a little confused lol sry I'm no good with poems..
ROFL reminds me of my bf and I! We started out as enemies xD