I made this poem for someone on MT

I like it is good but a little sad, anyways nice work!

This is a very good poem! It's very pretty and sad.

Really sad but very interesting of a poem. Good poem.

a gOod poem you got here.. it's sad yet i love it.. i guess i just can relate to it.. ^_^

"sec" is used a lot and the shortened term shouldn't be used in a poem as touching as it is. "moment" seems like a better word to use. Take it from someone who used to write poems. =(