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Ar Tonelico Wall: Songstress of light

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Minitokyo » Forum » Culture & Entertainment Fora » The Sandbox  Ar Tonelico Wall: Songstress of light

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Well, this is my very first Ar Tonelico wallpaper. The reason...well, i played the game and got a bit obsessed over it XD Plus the characters look cool ^^ If i could have found the rest of Aurica's 'costumes' i would put all of them in but...oh well. Anyway, i may or may not make a Misha one...Right, right. Any suggestions would be welcome ^^ I kinda like it how it is already...it might even be ready to just submit now XD But i'll wait and see what people have to say ^^

http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/5928/artonelicoaurica02ly9.th.jpg

Right now it's not quite ready to submit.

1. The background is kinda generic. Any character could be on a red brushed background, is there something game specific you could use? She's songstress, right? Maybe incorporated a music theme?

2. The characters standing behind her are distracting and might actually be considered "ghosting" which will get your wallpaper deleted. Large, soft/fuzzy characters behind the main scan are seen as a way to avoid coming up with a concept for your wall.

3. The girl is pretty small...but your wallpaper resolution is enormous. If you made a smaller wall the girl would take up enough space on her own. Or try vectoring her so that she's big enough for a huge wallpaper. Personally, I'd drop the size down because she's really clean.

Having the logo for the game is cool, but you might want to make it smaller, and right now it's so much brighter than the other stuff in the wall that it's the first thing your eye is drawn to.

Besides what sailorchiron has suggested, I would also like to add a few things.

- If you're planning on using the whole scan of the girl (ie her full body), she looks like she's standing on something, so make her a stage or something to stand on instead of floating in space?

- Those characters in the back are either blurry or overfiltered. I don't think you need them (they look like they're just there to take up space)...

- the image isn't wallpaper-sized right now. See the Policy for the accepted resolutions.

Ok, thanks for both your suggestions ^^ You's are right about the characters lol XD And the background too...i was just a bit lazy =( Hmm, something game related or a stage...well, a stage wouldn't really fit the game...not really XD But, she is part of a church...wonder if i can find a good scan of it XD
And oops, i had no idea about the size XD

Again, thanks for your suggestions ^^ Greatly appreciated

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