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I need your feedback for assignment ASAP please!

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Minitokyo » Forum » Life & Lifestyle Fora » School & Work  I need your feedback for assignment ASAP please!

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Hi,

firstly i was suprised about the colors. Blue is a nice color for technical usuals.
But i would change some things:

- Change the screenresolution of your presentation!
Change it to max. 1024 x 768 pixel
- at the Page "Top1" i can find on the left side many "¡@" in a row.
What's that?! ;) remove it ..
- Than i would change the color of the objects. all blue is no good idea.
there is no good contrast and it makes all boring. The backgroundcolor blue is ok.
- add movementarrows to the objects
- you have added on the page "Middle 2" some little photos in the circle.
but i can't realy recognize -> push up the dpi / resolution
- on the last page "Help & Support" you write "If you have any questions .." ..
make the I of if smaler - its to big for smooth reading
- and finaly i would add a real photo of the storage tower.
some people would like to see real textures and no graphics ;)

- The graphics you added i find it realy good - nice work!

so, thats all :)
i hope i can help you , i'am self a webdesigner and know these problems :)))

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