firstly i was suprised about the colors. Blue is a nice color for technical
usuals.
But i would change some things:
- Change the screenresolution of your presentation!
Change it to max. 1024 x 768 pixel
- at the Page "Top1" i can find on the left side many
"¡@" in a row.
What's that?!
remove it ..
- Than i would change the color of the objects. all blue is no good idea.
there is no good contrast and it makes all boring. The backgroundcolor blue is
ok.
- add movementarrows to the objects
- you have added on the page "Middle 2" some little photos in the
circle.
but i can't realy recognize -> push up the dpi / resolution
- on the last page "Help & Support" you write "If you have
any questions .." ..
make the I of if smaler - its to big for smooth reading
- and finaly i would add a real photo of the storage tower.
some people would like to see real textures and no graphics
- The graphics you added i find it realy good - nice work!
so, thats all
i hope i can help you , i'am self a webdesigner and know these problems ))
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Hi,
firstly i was suprised about the colors. Blue is a nice color for technical usuals.
But i would change some things:
- Change the screenresolution of your presentation!
remove it ..
Change it to max. 1024 x 768 pixel
- at the Page "Top1" i can find on the left side many "¡@" in a row.
What's that?!
- Than i would change the color of the objects. all blue is no good idea.
there is no good contrast and it makes all boring. The backgroundcolor blue is ok.
- add movementarrows to the objects
- you have added on the page "Middle 2" some little photos in the circle.
but i can't realy recognize -> push up the dpi / resolution
- on the last page "Help & Support" you write "If you have any questions .." ..
make the I of if smaler - its to big for smooth reading
- and finaly i would add a real photo of the storage tower.
some people would like to see real textures and no graphics
- The graphics you added i find it realy good - nice work!
so, thats all
))
i hope i can help you , i'am self a webdesigner and know these problems