I give hints of what illl do to him one day if he wont go away.
Duck tape a color silver across his face.
Oh I fantasies of killing him one day.
his voice makes my skin crawl.
A gun could work when aiming across the hall.
So I can sit patiently waiting in one place.
Don't come too close.
Because I fantasies of killing you one day.
this is my new poem I hope you like it its about this guy here who irritates me
so much that I want to kill him but I still sit silently until he gets the hint.
and leaves.
The free verse makes me think you are having mixed thoughts about this guy you
want to kill.
I know what you mean.. peaple always irritate other people. I was always bullied
in school because I was the "quiet" one. But I never hated them. Why?
Because I'll be just like them.. haters.
Anyways, the poem is short but very direct.. Its good overall.
Btw, you called me a dork.. are you referring to me? I can't be killed easily my
royal highness.
hmm......yup, i've to agree too. it's pretty unique & rhythmic
but my other opinion is, you need not hold grudge on the person you hate no
matter what. forgetting him is the best cure of all. there's no use you hate
him. you won't get anything nice.......
it would be much better if you think of happy things, you have friends like us
to chat with, anyway
i'm just wondering why she still want to remember that incident......it's really
a childish act lol...
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about this guy here who irritates me so much that I want to kill him but I still
sit silently until he gets the hint. and leaves.
lol.... i'm really scared...are you a killer before?
i have a feeling you aren't learning anything from that incident, despite many
of us advising you to ignore him. get a life, move ahead forward
lol its not on here its where I live its this guy who lives next door to me and
doesn't leave me alone.
he bothers me so much I want to kill him some times hes just irritating.
And yes I did learn and im still greatful to have been taught so much by such
great people like my friends.
lol its not on here its where I live its this guy who lives next door to me and
doesn't leave me alone.
he bothers me so much I want to kill him some times hes just irritating.
And yes I did learn and im still greatful to have been taught so much by such
great people like my friends.
i see......wow~that's really scary? to me,
i don't EVER think of killing anyone, no matter how i hate them. i would rather
defend than attack first because if you make the first move to kill......you
lose......and your last place is in jail
nyaaaa......i am more worried that this poem will be read by underage people
here (Minitokyo's majority are underage members) so, it's not that good to write
such poem here....
I give hints of what illl do to him one day if he wont go away.
Duck tape a color silver across his face.
Oh I fantasies of killing him one day.
his voice makes my skin crawl.
A gun could work when aiming across the hall.
So I can sit patiently waiting in one place.
Don't come too close.
Because I fantasies of killing you one day.
this is my new poem I hope you like it its about this guy here who irritates me so much that I want to kill him but I still sit silently until he gets the hint. and leaves.
Hmmm... Very unique.
ooh, that's dark. Can I runaway now?
The free verse makes me think you are having mixed thoughts about this guy you want to kill.
I know what you mean.. peaple always irritate other people. I was always bullied in school because I was the "quiet" one. But I never hated them. Why? Because I'll be just like them.. haters.
Anyways, the poem is short but very direct.. Its good overall.
Btw, you called me a dork.. are you referring to me? I can't be killed easily my royal highness.
hmm......yup, i've to agree too. it's pretty unique & rhythmic
but my other opinion is, you need not hold grudge on the person you hate no matter what. forgetting him is the best cure of all. there's no use you hate him. you won't get anything nice.......
it would be much better if you think of happy things, you have friends like us to chat with, anyway
Wow, that's a little extreme, don't you think? lol
i'm just wondering why she still want to remember that incident......it's really a childish act lol...
lol....
oh, please......are you trying to pick a fight?
i have a feeling you aren't learning anything from that incident, despite many of us advising you to ignore him. get a life, move ahead forward
lol its not on here its where I live its this guy who lives next door to me and doesn't leave me alone.
he bothers me so much I want to kill him some times hes just irritating.
And yes I did learn and im still greatful to have been taught so much by such great people like my friends.
your poem is very original
I also make poems but in Spanish
i see......wow~that's really scary?
nyaaaa......i am more worried that this poem will be read by underage people here (Minitokyo's majority are underage members) so, it's not that good to write such poem here....
woah...lucky i ain't that guy~comment on the poem?hmm....i guess i'll say it's unique~