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Bikin girl Wallie suggestions needed

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Well I just extracted this image from a scan that was here in minitokyo... i thought the girl was uncousious ^.^! to took me 2 hours just to clean it up and extracted and i for the background i couldn't think of anything i tryed to make it look like she was on the beach floor but that didn't work out so well. So on i made her look like she is sleep on a towel witch i doubt that it looks like..
Does anyone out there have suggestion was i should do to improve it or what type of wallie i should do?

This should be in the Sandbox
category.

Well, you did a good job of extracting ^_^

The position the girl is in, doesn't fit the background. She looks like she's being thrown to the ground. In other words, the background isn't in the same perspective as the girl. So, I say do the background over again. Maybe a baground of sand? Myabe even some parts of her limbs submerged in water too ^^ Although, that would be a bit hard to do, for me anyways XD

As for a change of style.. Hmnn.. It depends what kind of mood you're trying to go for...

Well I was trying to do that melymay but it was sooooooooo hard and so i decieded to make it look like she was on a towel. This was rushed the only thing that was not rushed was the extraction... the background was thou, just so i could get fast ideas on my next wallpaper...
thanks for complimenting on my extraction XD because i suck at extraction but bit by bit i'm getting better :P

I Luv It Loveble-IY, U Tryin' ur Best It'z Kool ^^

The wallpaper is nice. However, there are some things to mention:
- the scan is extracted well, so it's nice.
- the background is also cool
BUT
- it's odd since the girl is not sitting on the beach... she's like... floating in the sky
- the shadow proves what I said.
- now that I look closer I see some extraction problems... at the hair and there's a black line in the left...
- the filter/effect whatever it is that u used on the background makes the wallpaper look like it has a bad quality... which is not true I suppose.

The biggest problem is the way you positioned the girl on the background... try putting her on a beach, on a towel if possible, then add some shells brushes around. It's the best thing to do with a scan that looks like this.

I think she must have, like something to sleep on.... If you do that, you may need to adjust the shadow a bit.
Don't think it's a good idea to put some cushion like behind her...

Nice ^q^ <nose bleeding>

Ok well thanks... I did all ur suggestions and fixed the extraction problem
I just added it to the gallery i hope all of u view it Thank u!

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