Holla... I just found that in here, we can post our story. Th'x a lot for the info
Hope you like this one from me.

Rated : 15+; Strong violance and killing

So, let's begiiiin...

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Halloween - A Child's Killing

October 31st
That night, in every corner of the city, Halloween’s celebration was very glorious. Some of the people celebrated Halloween by gathering in their house, while others on the street. Children wore witch and wizard costume, knocked at every door while saying, “Trick or Treat !”
Meanwhile, in a very luxurious house, police found a corpse of a rich businessman with a lot of toys scattered around him. Beside the corpse, there was a piece of paper with a picture like a child’s sketches. The sketches showed 4 people and there was writing, like a child’s writing : ‘Father – Sister – Me – Mother’. There was a cross on the Dad’s picture. Not far from the corpse, on the wall, there was another writing (similar to writing under the picture), says : ‘Dad has accompanied me to play, now it’s mom and sister’s turn. Mom is a very pretty actress, and I will bath together with mom soon.’

The police were puzzled with the case. The proof led to the suicide of the businessman. But the writing and picture, showed that it was a murder. The next day, all media broadcast the shocking news : “A Child’s Play Killing”.

The police search for nothing. At last, they decided to have famous actresses under surveillance because of the writing on the wall. Two months have passed, and nothing happened. And the police decided to close the case.

October 31st, the following year
A famous actress was found dead naked in her bathtub. Beside the corpse, there was a duck toy which really strange to be in that place. And under the bathtub, police found a piece of paper with same writing and picture like the ones before. But this time, a cross is on Mom’s.
The inspector, who led the searching, laid his fist on wall angrily.
“Damn it ! I’m sure at this time, the murderer must be laughing at us !”, then he looked at one of his men and said, “Hey, find another writing ! The writing that look like a child’s writing !”
Not long after that, one of the men came in hurry.
“Inspector, you’re right ! There’s a writing on the backyard’s wall !”
Then he run to the backyard with rushed. On the wall across the swimming pool, they saw another children’s writing : ‘I am really happy, to have bath with mom. Tomorrow is the time to take a walk with sister, who is the idol in her school.’
“To.. tomorrow ?”, one of the police looked at the inspector, “How is it, Sir ? There will be another murder tomorrow ?”
The inspector was silent for a moment, and then he said, “Refer to the first murder, ‘tomorrow’ in this writing is not refer to tomorrow, but to October 31st next year.”
Looking at his men, he said out loud, “Search for any proof we left from the first murder ! This time, we must stop this crazy killer before there’s another victim !”

‘A Child’s Play Killer took another victim’, that’s the headline of newspapers in the city. In every corner of the city, people talked about the case. Some people named the case as Halloween Murder, because the case with same modus happened at Halloween.

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Sorry about my bad in English ^^a C&C pls...

Good.... careful with your spelling

Ow, moved to Chat Lounge, I see. Th'x for the comment. Ok, here's next (hope no mistranslation ^^a)

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The 3rd year, a few days before 31st October
One night, in a house in suburb, a girl awake in fear. Sweat rolled over her face, and she’s panted. She tried to calm down by taking a deep breath, and try to remember the nightmare she had. But she can’t remember a thing. She feels really annoyed, but try to back to her sleep.
The next morning, when she go to school, a police car stop her.
“Miss Raine Silverstone, right ?”
The girl nodded, but she looked confused. The young policeman tries to calm her down.
“It’s ok, I didn’t mean to arrest you. I intend to protect you instead.”
Raising her eyebrows, Raine ask, “Protect me ? What do you mean, sir ?”
With a gentle smile, the policeman say, “Oh, I haven’t introduce myself, have I ? My name’s Felix, and I am on duty to protect you.”
Raine sounded impatient, when she ask for the second time, “That’s what I’m asked before, Officer Felix ! Why you’re on duty to protect me ?”
Still in his smile, he then answer, “I’m sure you know about Child’s Play Killer case, right ?”
Raine nods.
“After looked at all the evidence, and background of the victims, police sure that the next victim, and maybe the last, will be you.”

Actually, Felix says that with normal tone, but for Raine, it sounds like a thunder in the morning. For a few minutes, she just stare at Felix with a half opened mouth.
“Are you okay, Miss Silverstone ?”
Raine gasped, “Ye.. yes, I’m fine. I’m just.. shocked to hear it. Oh, why do the police think that I’ll be the next victim ?”
Felix takes a deep breath.
“As I have told you, it’s according to the evidence found in the killing place, and past of the victims.”, then Felix glancing at his watch, “It will take long time to explain. I’ll fetch you after the school, and then I will explain everything. How’s that, Miss Silverstone ?”
Raine nods.
“Well, see you later, Miss Silverstone.”
“Raine !”
“Eh ?”, Felix stops his car for a moment.
“Just call me Raine. It’s too long to say Silverstone, right ?”
Felix smile again, “Alright Miss Raine, until this afternoon.”

Having arrived at school, Raine parked her bike. And when she was about to go to her classroom, a voice calls her, “Sister…”
Raine turned, but nobody was around. Raine thought she was misheard, then turn back. But the voice was heard for the second time, “Sis, why do you forget me ?”
Raine look around, and tries to listen to her surrounding. But just breeze can be heard.
“Who’s that ? Come out, this isn’t funny !”
But there are just silence and breeze. Suddenly Raine feel there’s ‘something’ near her, and then she decides to run to her classroom. When she arrives, a friend of her give a confused look.
“What’s wrong, Raine ? Have you seen a ghost ? You look pale.”
Raine answer, “Maybe.”
“What ? Are you serious ? A ghost in our school ?”
Raine doesn’t answer. Meanwhile, one of the men laugh and says, “Wow, you’re great, Raine ! Even a ghost attracted to you. You’re really this school idol !”
“Alex, don’t tease Raine like that ! She’s in fright !”
Raine pay no attention to that conversation; just sit in her seat inhale.
“That voice… why do I feel so familiar with it ? It called me sister.
Does this have a relationship with the topic officer Felix want to talk about ?”

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The grammar is rather bad, and some of the descriptions of characters are not clear. Plot is not very well.

Not bad. I am awayting more progress ^^

Th'x for all the comment. Anyway about the ascii sign, it's actually "..." this sign. I'll post the continue later.