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a fishy idea wallie need comment

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hi well ive done this wall and i need some advice .... i know it is not the best and i think it is the worst ok but plz help me improve it ^__________^ thks

link: http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/1063/lightdoneyj7.jpg

I really don't know what to say as I don't really see the theme of the wall,is this something like 'it's a fishy fish world'?Please tell me what the purpose of the wall and no offence.

a fish? dunno what to say

  • Saikusa
  • Retired Moderator
  • 46wk 0d ago

The fish in the lightbulb is surreal, but then you've not really followed it up with anything. The background is just a plain white mass of negative space and a few fuzzy blue circles. None of it seems to have any connection, and the blue circles look like you were stuff for ideas on how to fill out all that space. But more than anything... a fish in a lightbulb?

Seriously, this is an anime-manga site. Even if you were trying for an artistic General Wallpaper, where's the art? Where's the technical ability? It's easily photoshopped together using a couple of photographs.

Try and think more about the sort of audience you want to share this with. What is it you want to say with something this abstract. How to fill out the empty space with a theme that ties it all together.

well, if ur wanting to make it better, i'd say add some more detail and graphics around the light buld and fish thing. its ur choice whether or not to post it out there. and btw, i got a WW2 wall from this site so i dont think a fish-bulb is any worse

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