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penguin heaven; does this look all right?

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umm this is my second general wallpaper. before i officially post it up on the website, perhaps anybody out there could give me a few tips as to how to improve my work. does it look a little too plain? i'd really appreciate it :D

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b54/akamarshmallows/made_penguinheaven.jpg

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b54/akamarshmallows/made_penguinheaven.jpg

Looks lovely and cuutee^^! :) :D

Well, it's cute, but... I don't know how to say this, but I feel it doesn't quite fit. I can't really place my finger on it, but some thing's not right here...
First, I think you should make it at a higher resolution. I don't even think MT accepts such small wallpapers. The minimum you should have is 1024 x 768.
Also, the clouds in the background look repetitive. If you used brushes, try making them a bit more diverse, more random.

hmm well thanks for the advice :D i'll work on it.

Hmm..I think the penguin at the rightmost looks like it has a hump on it? Besides that, the clouds (especially those at the bottom right corner look noisy. Gaussian blur might do the trick.

The gate also looks awkward, like it's appearng out of nowhere. The area is open, why the need of a gate? I suggest placing fences at its left and right.

You can do it! :)

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