Hi. I am an amateur writer with many ideas for FanFics and novels but is hard to
keep on going without the opinion of readers. So, since someone have offered me
the chance of publishing, I need to make my work even better than ever. So I
would be glad if you help me rating my proyects. I promise to post a chapter of
the proyect who reaches the best rating at the end of the week in order to give
time for the voting and for me to make a good chapter for you all. Here all the
links to each story plot:
Thank you for giving it a look. Feel free to give me all your opinions and
questions or even chat with me about my work at kyorus@hotmail.com in MSN
Messenger. I'm almost all the day on.
well so far i've read your synopsis for apple's world, i think it sounds good, a
little bit matrix like, mixed with some angel sanctuary.... plus i think it's a
good idea to place the story in times of 'peace', it might result in some good
reflexions etc.... hum i just wondered if it's supposed to be some funny type or
more serious type???
btw, i'd have imagined the heroin more mature like (i'm refering to your drawing
on MT)
about heretics, i don't know what to think about it.... on first impression i'd
say well, just another love story, you know it just doesn't sounds that good to
me right now (but that's only my feeling) ....
maybe you can make something great out of it, but definitely not my fav
hum .... ironmaxx.... mecha stuff isn't my type of story, though the plot sounds
pretty good . still it's the same scheme, the hero saving the world and stuff
XO ... no harm done, i like the kinda mythology you make (the iron titans and
such)
captain dakota sounds okay to me, i thought at first it was going to be like
ghost in the shell, but you take a space bg, that's a good idea... the struggle
of the cyborg genius against the empire (star wars like?? ahah )
is a little bit overused but it seems pretty good to me
.....
well after reading all of them, i'd have to go for apple's world
^_^ hey i liked heretics it's the best of
them.... i guess? next to it is Captain Dakota.
is there a continuation? i really wanna know what happened between the two
star-crossed lovers. hmm.... apple's world... i somehow didn't seem to
understand the plot. Ironmaxx.... i guess it seemed so ordinary... maybe a few
changes would do. ^_^ but keep up the good work, maybe i'll see one of your
works aired on t.v. good luck!
p.s. i really like to read the full version of heretics, it's really cool! i
mean... hey!
I liked the 'Heretics' the most (though it kinda reminds me of my friends
project... have to tell him that's he's not the only one writting a story in
which angels and demons are involved ).
The only story I didn't like was the IronMaxx (maybe it's because I'm not into
mecha series, but...), coz it sounds very much a like many other series, that
I've watched or read.
Hi. I am an amateur writer with many ideas for FanFics and novels but is hard to keep on going without the opinion of readers. So, since someone have offered me the chance of publishing, I need to make my work even better than ever. So I would be glad if you help me rating my proyects. I promise to post a chapter of the proyect who reaches the best rating at the end of the week in order to give time for the voting and for me to make a good chapter for you all. Here all the links to each story plot:
For Apple's World: http://www.angelfire.com/anime5/kyorus06/Appleintro.htm
For Heretics: http://www.angelfire.com/anime5/kyorus06/Hereticintro.htm
For IronMaxx: http://www.angelfire.com/anime5/kyorus06/Ironmaxxintro.htm
For Captain Dakota: http://www.angelfire.com/anime5/kyorus06/Dakotaintro.htm
Thank you for giving it a look. Feel free to give me all your opinions and questions or even chat with me about my work at kyorus@hotmail.com in MSN Messenger. I'm almost all the day on.
well so far i've read your synopsis for apple's world, i think it sounds good, a little bit matrix like, mixed with some angel sanctuary.... plus i think it's a good idea to place the story in times of 'peace', it might result in some good reflexions etc.... hum i just wondered if it's supposed to be some funny type or more serious type???
btw, i'd have imagined the heroin more mature like (i'm refering to your drawing on MT)
about heretics, i don't know what to think about it.... on first impression i'd say well, just another love story, you know it just doesn't sounds that good to me right now (but that's only my feeling)
....
maybe you can make something great out of it, but definitely not my fav
hum .... ironmaxx.... mecha stuff isn't my type of story, though the plot sounds pretty good
. still it's the same scheme, the hero saving the world and stuff
XO ... no harm done, i like the kinda mythology you make (the iron titans and
such)
captain dakota sounds okay to me, i thought at first it was going to be like ghost in the shell, but you take a space bg, that's a good idea... the struggle of the cyborg genius against the empire (star wars like?? ahah
)
is a little bit overused but it seems pretty good to me 
.....
well after reading all of them, i'd have to go for apple's world
hope i've been some help
^_^ hey i liked heretics it's the best of them.... i guess? next to it is Captain Dakota.
is there a continuation? i really wanna know what happened between the two star-crossed lovers. hmm.... apple's world... i somehow didn't seem to understand the plot. Ironmaxx.... i guess it seemed so ordinary... maybe a few changes would do. ^_^ but keep up the good work, maybe i'll see one of your works aired on t.v. good luck!
p.s. i really like to read the full version of heretics, it's really cool! i mean... hey!
I liked the 'Heretics' the most (though it kinda reminds me of my friends project... have to tell him that's he's not the only one writting a story in which angels and demons are involved
).
The only story I didn't like was the IronMaxx (maybe it's because I'm not into mecha series, but...), coz it sounds very much a like many other series, that I've watched or read.