Poem: I am Nobody

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SweetGrl

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This is another poem about my feelings sometimes when i am around people that don't care about me. But i am glad that all my friends in MT does!! Thanx guys!! ^^ Well, hope you like it!

~ I am Nobody~

Sitting alone, under the black sky
I am nobody
People walk by, without noticing me
I know i am nobody
When i think of my past
I know that i have nothing
I walk home with no shoulder to cry on
While thinking to myself
"Why do i have to be born?"
"Why isn't there anybody to save me?"
I look out at a wall that blocks me
And see my reflection, looking back at me
With a face of falling tears
As the rain pours on my tear-stain face,
I realized that i am nobody


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  • Aug 11, 2005
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You are somebody..if you werent somebody then nobody would know anybody..XD sorry..confusing..awesome poem.

mentis

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I know that MT, as wonderful as it is, is no substitute for a real friend. Nevertheless, I think it safe to say that we think you to be "somebody." But I hope that someday, the friends you make here, will be fewer than the friends you will have right by your side :D.

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Nice poem, and i agree with toxic23 ;)

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kick ass poem, Im glad you found some peace with us at MT ^^

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thecatmistress

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you are a somebody. a somebody with a gift or poetry...... i felt the emotion...... amazing poem....

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  • Aug 12, 2005

AngelKate

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Aww...sad, but very well written. Hey, you should join Poetry-Corner.

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Lots of good poems are posted there. :)

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you are somebody SweetGrl-san! and what a beautiful poem... i especially like your opening lines...

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what a great poem. and i'll add this too: everyone is a somebody. there is never a nobody. keep it up sweetgrl.

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  • Aug 12, 2005

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*tear* you are someone to me! *wipes tears away!* XD im here for ya when you need me! i got your back!

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  • Aug 12, 2005

animefairy

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I think I agree with toxictea23 and MagicianFairy!!
The poem is very emotional and good!!
Keep up the good work!!! ^.^

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  • Aug 12, 2005

hytokiri

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Great poem, and don't worry, your friends on MT will always be here for u. Take care.

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Yeah, i aree with toxictea, that is true. But this is a very nice poem! *hugs*

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SealedSword

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Another depressing poem eh? O_o
I also agree with Toxictea =P
You are a somebody, otherwise none of your friends would even bother being your friend =P
Try not to think such depressing thoughts, and do the happy dance! XD
Great poem by the way, I like how it's put together, welldone! :)
See ya around

  • Aug 13, 2005

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aww~~ nice poem there.. ^^ you are not nobody..
at least you are our friend that is kept in our heart.. :D

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  • Aug 13, 2005

Kaoru-San

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awwwaaaahhh ;~; OHHH dat's soo sad!! :( I espically like the part where it says:

Quote by SweetGrlI walk home with no shoulder to cry on


Dat's sad.. so who was it that broke your heart?

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  • Aug 13, 2005
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Wow...that is an amazing poem. It is...the exact way that I have felt...for months... That poem was great...you are getting precise in your skill. Keep it up!

  • Aug 14, 2005

beoulved

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Hey SweetGrl, you r somebody and don't you ever doubt that... oh yeah, toxic23 nice re... well SweetGrl, see you ltr.

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  • Aug 15, 2005
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Another great poem I have read in minitokyo. Nice poem and keep it up. ^_^

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  • Aug 16, 2005

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Keep smiling! :D

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seriously... i rekon its a nice poem... but i think that your feelings are much more important
i hope u dont think u r a nobody anymore coz im pretty sure there r lotz of pplz waiting to make u something great and important!!

(nice poem!) XP

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  • Aug 16, 2005

undeadsymphony

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Nicely done.
Just remeber your friends are here for you. :)

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  • Aug 16, 2005

Shoku

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Very Nice Poem. Better than all of mine. Mine has too much repetitions.

I didn't know that you can post poems and maybe, essays here. So you can if it is not too long?

jasaiyajin

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I know it's an old poem, but I just read it now. The connotation to "nobody" signifies others not knowing the person in the poem. The tears reflect the soul's earning to be known/understood/acknoledged/cared about the ones that have no interest.

i don't believe that any of us have a true possession, except maybe a soul. The lack of attachment creates a self inflicted hole that binds the mind into looking for comfort in others, a way to escape the torture. One day some may realize the play is all the way life brings the lessons to sway our thoughts 'til death day. On that day, be not attached to any worldly possessions, cause nothing here can be brought on the voyage anyway.

Wow, WTF, I gotta get off my lollerskates, cause I'm falling off topic.

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  • Sep 06, 2005

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